above average but...
Well done with the style and the artwork but I don't really think this is particularly exceptional. I don't want to be too hard on you but there wasn't really much of a story and the dialouge was pretty uninspired. It had nice style but after a while it got a little grating, there's such thing as too much of a good thing. Work on what you base your flash works on and you can really live up to the potential that you've clearly have.