MAKE MORE!!!!
Ok that was awsome, definatly worth the front page and definatly worth watching. You should totally make more, the story in this episode not great but works as an awsome intro if you were to make more episoded. You definatly have something here.
good
umm it was good i dont think theres much to say except that u made an excelent flash
adorable
Great sounds, music and graphics. The only flaw was the story - being a cutsy anime, it lacked a humorous plot.
hahahaha.... Random Anime is fun : )
Well,what can I say? I liked it. As random as it was, there was a storyline, and you brought it out in a pretty funny way.
You have an excellent drawing style, but your walking animations need improvement. Don't worry; I'm a stickler when it comes to the fine details like that. You're better at it than a good number of first-timers, though; you get the bobbing and armswing down, but your footwork seems off. I know that was stylistic with Marin, but her father just felt... off.
Good sound effects. Marin's vocalization was clear and understandable.
the fight scene (I don't know if you can really call it that, but I guess it was) was funny. I liked your "when fighting magic" Public Service announcment trick. That just added to the randomness.
All told, an impressive first flash. Good job!
ya that was good
it shouldve been longer and thats gay how there is no hentai and foir that gurls punishment it shouldve shown her getting ganged banged like theres no tommorow by two guys in suites who pull off there belts and it ends up being karate fighting guys with belts cuz she got raped :D