Well, that was pretty awesome! Good work. =D
That was a teriffic piece of storytelling. Please please PLEASE bring Mariyn back!
I hate to break the mood, but might I offer some constructive critisism? (I will even if you say no! :p)
The sound effect quality was a bit low; all those crackly noises are very noticable when the volume is up high.
Also, I might be wrong about this, but it's my understanding that when you introduce yourself, you forego suffixes. (Although that may change in certain parts of Japan.)
Anyway, good for you! You rule! Make more flash! Etc.
Best of Luck