pretty good, but just a few things...
this flash was pretty nice. but...there was no audio other than the song, and the song didnt seem all that fitting for a the fight scene. it took a little while for the movie to pick up, too. that intro scene with the girl walking sort of dragged on in my mind. i thought it was animated pretty well though and the fight was fun to watch. werd.
Its ok, but....
Not so sure it deserves #1. Its a nice story and all, the idea is great, but it could be better. I mean, can it seriously compete with other good flashes? Plus, how it got #1, i have no clue. Last time I checked, it was like #24 or something on the top 50 list.
Hey not too bad!
I like your style man, the way you draw, its great!
Each of your sumissions ive seen start of with no explanation and its up to yourself to figure out whats going on, but thats great. The graphics are decent, the sound is a bit strange to me, i didnt really like the music but it really doesnt matter what i like, im sure loads of people felt it matched the animation. I wouldnt mind seeing more of these characters, along with the one in papalote. Great work on these submissions man, keep it up and you might become the best and most favourite author on NG!
Screams with talent
Very, very nice. I usually wouln't be able to sit through something so corny, but you made it not only watchable but enjoyable.
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Great flash, man. Keep up the good work. A couple questions, though.
1) What does "Hoy te amo" mean, and what language is it in?
2) What song is that playing throughout the flash? I really enjoyed that song.
Thanks!!