!Que preciosa! Me encanta mucho.
Cool story. I liked how you made the romance between much deeper than just some dude saving some chic with big breasts. You made it so that they were complicated without even having them talk! I like how you gave the impression that they were friends. :)
Oh I'm just a big softy who is awful at speaking spanish. Lo siento, estoy aprendiendo y no puedo escribir bien en mi <i>lengua prima.</i> ;-p