One of the most loved on Newgrounds
Every once in awhile when I get on newgrounds I see this entry creep back into the Top 50. I think a big part of that is the story that you've created. I think you leave enough open for the viewer to be able to use their imagination to fill in the blanks. However, the continuity in this one is fairly spotless. I would like to see your animation be a little sharper at this point, and even smoother. I think you are a great anime artist, but I think my expectations for you have gotten higher. The music you chose is interesting and consistent with all your pieces. The more you put into these the more people will enjoy them. The characters are stand outs in yours so make them came alive with more detail and more of a story and people will be instantly drawn to you.