A constructive critisism ('WTF!?' You say)
I'm a huge Final Fantasy fan so obviously I was very interested in this game. Unfortunately it does need a lot of work! There aren't any instructions with the game, which started me off very disorientated, please include instructions with any game you submit to make the game easier to grasp. The art work was not perfect by far but the concept was there, but if you're going to copy original art, the you need to be more accurate, if not then draw your own. I found the world map slightly dull but I do commend you for the idea since it does keep that Final Fantasy feel to the game.
It probably would have been better if you had actually played the games and got to know the characters. Then you could put the character's own personalities into what they say and how they act. Yuna would definately not call someone a 'freak'.
The looping track got very tedious after around 4 plays. Could I suggest you use different music for different scenes? It would make it wound a whole lot more interesting. And while I'm on the subject of sounds, you should have used the FF menu cursor noises to make it sound really authentic.
I'm sorry my review hasn't been a very positive one but I hope I've been helpful towards other projects you may have in the pipeline. Keep practicing and all the best!