Dude, you could've done better...
You did really good with the visuals, but the dialog was horribly flat. Also, the girls I wanted to date weren't around and saying hi to the girl and having them run off got annoying.
I reccomend you play these games. Final Fantasy is a great series. Try seven--that's my favorite. Try a smaller amount of girls and really get into the character of them.
Please redo this game--it has so much potential!
...and who is Sarah? O.o