Happy Medium
i think you've found a fairly good medium of obscenity and classic humor. I would tend to agree the F-bomb should be defused and removed, but everything else was properly sensored and appropriatly placed. As far as fight scenes and interactivity go... i could imagine you placing an interactive fight scene or 2 into it. However, don't feel presured to do so, because you have a good thing going here.
Last minute comment: increase the volume on Gato's tune. and on ur sound bytes during the fight. See you next episode!