Reviews for Chrono Trigger Unglued 03

[Malacos]

Happy Medium

i think you've found a fairly good medium of obscenity and classic humor. I would tend to agree the F-bomb should be defused and removed, but everything else was properly sensored and appropriatly placed. As far as fight scenes and interactivity go... i could imagine you placing an interactive fight scene or 2 into it. However, don't feel presured to do so, because you have a good thing going here.

Last minute comment: increase the volume on Gato's tune. and on ur sound bytes during the fight. See you next episode!

Cryokenetic responds:

Very well...I will tone down the mass explitives in future episodes, and probably reload EP III with a toned-down ending scene.

[Winter-Stardust]

Almost as good as the first two, but....

there really was no need for the "F" word to be used. S.O.B is fine....but the "F" word was a little too much.
I really liked how you added to Gato's song tho'. That was funny!
(I always thought the center of his body looked like a pokeball...lol)
I hope you make more of these, I can't wait to see what happens.

Cryokenetic responds:

Thanks for the positive review. If the F word was too much, I'll keep the swearing PG-13.

[Geminate]

Too...

Bad you felt you had to add all the foul language, it was totally unnecessary and not a bit humorous. You are too good to sink so low.

Cryokenetic responds:

I did take the next step and drop the F-bomb in this episode. I wasn't sure whether to do it or not, it just seemed to fit. Does anyone else think it was too vulgar? If I get enough complaints I could tone the profanity down...

[pitagirl18]

not bad

Just watched all three episodes. This is a nice parody of the game so far. And I liked how a bit more interractivity was included into it (other than clicking an arrow to continue the text).

Only one minor thing to improve upon: at certain times, the text just advances itself... and does so too fast to read all of the dialogue.

Cryokenetic responds:

I do at certain points mean to do that, to the effect that they are supposed to be interupted by someone or something else. And usually you're not supposed to be able to finish what the person is saying so it seems like they were interupted. Perfect example: Crono not finishing his sentence when Marle bumps into him in EP II.

[Gagne-1]

Ugh...

Gaah... My ribs hurt cuz i laughed too hard.

Cryokenetic responds:

Uh-oh...I think I smell a few lawsuits coming on...I nearly suffocated the last guy and now I hurt this one.