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well to start with you are actually dead at this moment in time, so my advise may be pretty irelelvent, but just in case you have the internet in hell and are watching behond the grave, im gonna say it any way. Your movie was pretty shit overall, no offence or anything, just though that it diddnt really have much of a plot to it. the animation was pretty poor with little sound. any way theres alway room for improvement so keep at it.