first submission... first good score
very nice dude
first time you say....WOW... keep it up and you mite and up on the front page one day
keep up the good work
Reviews for ""Target Practice""
Regret responds:
Thanks man, and I plan on animating alot more.
Yea, i heard about that shooting on the news. terrible way to die but it was sum kind of a prelude i guess. Was kinda like the event that happend except it was in a school. Good remeberence.....
Odd, but well made.
I have seen alot of flaming of this author and have to add my say. People have said how these animations were a cry for help, maybe they were, they complain about how it could not have been seen before and I have the answer, how is this any different from the animations in the ultra violence section? The problem is that this is just one of many extremely violent submissions on newgrounds, how are we to sort the ones done for fun from those that are a cry for help? The truth is that no one could have seen beyond these animations, it is in fact impossible to know who is likely to re-enact the violent killings in their games and movies, until of course the author commits these crimes, instead of shunning the late Jeff Weise we should embrace his memory as a warning. His crimes were horrible, we all know this, but as some have said this man was mentaly unstable, probably due to the bullying he recived during childhood and the traumatic events that had happened within his family, and he could not control the primal instincts that all humans are prone to, we all know that dogs have to be taught not to bite and children not to hit each other, this is a fact of life and cannot be avoided. We will never know the true reason behind his acts of violence but we can at least accept that we could do nothing about it. In addition, it was pointed out by a member early in the flashes life that Jeff might need help but Jeff replied. "Lol, you obviously can't tell the difference between Fantasy and reality. This cartoon was made for nothing more than Random violence, and believe it or not there's an audience out there that this appeals to. So don't try judging my Mental health based upon a simple animation, capisce?" This may show that at the time of this animation Jeff was 'fine' but could also indicate that a level of premeditation was involved, but as I have said, there was realy nothing we could do about it. So lets not judge the animation on how the author ended his life but on the quality and content of the amination its self.
man
out of all the paths he could have took why the stupid one WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know, this is actually pretty decent. Nice fullbody animation, an interesting black-on-white style with some red tossed in, kind of like Sin City... I feel like you're really onto something here. My biggest problem with this animation is that although the graphics are pretty good, with the characters having nice, solid proportions, the animation itself doesn't have much easing, and could have used a lot of improvement.
Also, the effect you used for blackening the cop car and the sound for the gun suggest you're trying to put a lot of impact behind the gunshots. It would have really helped if you'd done some kind of shadows and lighting to expand on the force of the gun.
Other than that this is really pretty good. It's really a shame you won't be able to continue this kind of stuff.