Please tell me you're doing this for a living.
...Because if you're not, you should be. This is beautiful. I would offer my humble skills as a voice, but with the visual story telling presented here, I doubt you need it. Do you plan on completing this feature in an entirely non-voice style or is this just an action sequence to show us all what you can do? Fantastic pov choices too!. The character's movements could be a little smoother, but this is great for a teaser and you could fix that type of thing later. I like your choices for audio and gaff. I went throug a second time just to listen to it. The mixture of sounds you guys used was thick without weighing down my ears(I'm a music student/geek). When do we get to see/hear more from you?