"Teaser"... Hmm...
While this was a good flash work, as reviewers before me have probably pointed out, it just wasn't my cup of tea. The art was very nice, and you worked tweening in there almost without it being apparent at all. The sound effects were crisp and beautiful, fit very well (though I didn't enjoy the opening theme much). The backgrounds were gorgeous and detailed. This flash was very strong in most areas, but I felt it lacking in the area I hold highest: Plot. Don't get me wrong, I'm sure your series will have quite an entertaining plot, and after reading the author's comments I had a slightly better idea of what the plot was, but I didn't feel this really worked as a teaser, it seemed more like a "filler" episode. It would have been nice to get to know your main character just a little more, and to have a better idea of why all of this was going on. A narrative by her would have accomplished that. As I watched this I was a bit confused as to what was going on. I was, throughout the flash, honestly waiting to see an angel. I realize that you put some info in your author's comments, but that's like a movie director explaining his plot on Jay Leno, some people will see the movie without seeing the talk show, likewise, some people will see this flash without paying any attention whatsoever to the author's comments, and when that happens it is likely that a lot of them will walk away confused. That aside, I do look forward to your series. Keep up the good work and all that.