wasted talent -- and i mean a whole LOT of talent
your flash is amazing, and your sound sync-ing is impressive. you draw so well, and you capture the third dimension professionally. but: your flash has no story line, unfortunately, and the whole attractive girl with the gun cliché makes my stomach turn. i wish this had a point to it and not just robots with static voices and random cars flipping over in the air. i honestly have no desire to see your upcoming episodes, unless i'm just in the mood for gore, tits, and violence. one thing you did very well was your injection of personality into the black-clad antagonists, so that it wasn't too cliché. maybe make them less sheep-like, so that it seems they have a purpose for dressing up like scuba-divers with machine guns. you are an amazing artist, however, so keep up the good graphics work. i advise you, however, to read some books other than graphic novels or watch some movies not featured on ActionMax, so that you get some acceptable ideas for a plot.