Amazing, simply amazing.....but...
First of all that was freakin sweet man , really i admire your work already and this was just a sample, but there is this slight little thing that kind of damages the integrity of your story, the one man (woman in this case) against the world thing has been done so many times it has developed some cliché's. such as big guns, big tits and MUEH MACHO, if u know what i mean :). Also the title has been quite overused.
but apart from that u did an awesome job, especially with the opening sequence! (and gratz for using the deftones :D )
u did a superb job man gratz!