.. Holy Crap.
I must say that I am thoroughly impressed with this flash that you made, especially since you stated that it was your first. Not only did it satisfy my need for a horror driven mystery story but it also heightened my standards on how they should be made. There were times where I wanted to wretch out the contents of my stomach, due to the overall foreboding and atmosphere of the game. Even during the beginning sequence of events I couldn't help but feel nauseous as I clicked my way through the house. Truthfully I thought something was going to pop out at me every time I went into a new room.
However there was one thing that bothered me to no end, and that was the fact that it is extremely irritating to play this game in a lighted space. I had to squint at the screen a fair amount of times to see if there was something there or not. If you could define some of the images a bit more it would be much appreciated.
All those things aside, great job!