very nice
make more, I liked this a lot
very nice
make more, I liked this a lot
Good Storyline
I like the twist at the end :) hehe
good stuff
this is one of the best flashes out there id like to see some more of this i want that little dude that pissed in the river to have the shit kicked out of him
YEEEEEEEEE
um... the end was kinda gross, but otherwise, AWESOME! LUV IT! I WANNA BE THAT GOOD! *scrawlssomethingonpaper*Uhm... LOOK!*showspeiceofcrap*SHUT UP! I'LL GET BETTER WITH PRACTICE! uhm... anyway, great!
pretty good
it was pretty good not great but it was good. i dont think that there was enough humor or action in it so it could've been better