VERY professional looking!
The artwork in this thing is AMAZING! It didn’t feel like I was watching a FLASH at all, but something that you would see in theaters… OK, maybe not in theaters, but I could DEFINITELY see this on TV. The skill level is high on this one.
The only problem that I had with it was the story. I feel like it didn’t really go anywhere. I appreciated what it was trying to do, and I liked the ending… just not AS an ending. I wish that I had gotten a better understanding of the characters- which were otherwise very well developed and I wish there was more reason to watch it.
I hope that this isn’t taken the wrong way- the writing is actually pretty good, there just needs… well, MORE to the story. But overall, it was a VERY cool piece. Keep it up. If you can get a good story going, get lucky and meet some of the right people I really do see BIG potential for you.