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I liked the movie, the sound effects, the graphics, and everything technical was great. You really have talent, but I feel as far as the story itself goes, you lost the plot trying to hard to make the story humorous. The story is pointless, there is no conflict. My advice for you is to just sit down and think of a suspensful...or at least meaningful conflict and then make the flash, and if it is meant to be funny the humor will come with the story on its own.