You are such a great animator
I absolutely love the animation in your films, which are comparible to profesional work. However, as good as your animation is, it means nothing in terms of the quality of your films. The creatures seem too "cartoonish," which I know is subjective, but if you were to work on the designs for them more, it would be an improvement.
Also, the ending had to be one of the stupidest things I have ever seen. You really need to work on the story; and if I were you, I would drop the concept of Bracky. Although an interesting concept, this is nothing more than a twist on Tom and Jerry.
Sorry if I seem to be comming of as too critical; which I usually do when I like a person's work. Just trying to offer some constructive critisism.
-RusticCreature