Interesting...
I thought that was a nice little animation. The atmospheric effects absolutley brilliant and the water effects were fantastic. Although this does not match up to Little Foot it has great qualities and most of the movie was slick. What bothered me the most was how choppy the pacing was. For example, When bitey was skipping with the yellow creature in his dream it went from one position to another and there wasn't even movement it was just here- to -here quickly. I would suggest you use a lower frame rate like 22 or 18 and edit more frames, because the higher the frame rate the more frames you have to use to make it smooth. And although it is EX-tremely slick at a higher speed and frame rate it takes longer, and considering what i saw, it looked like you did in a rush without patience because of how choppy it is.
Anyway... Peace out and keep up the brilliant atmospheric effects.
p.s. I loved the part when he totally crushed that bird with the tree