Nice Art, and Ani but the story was too boring.
i gave this one a 3, not very interesting but it wasnt bad either. it was purgatory.
Reviews for "Moonlight"
You're half-way there
you probably wont get to read this review but as a fellow artist and storyteller here is my opinion. you have a professional look to your work, which is good. you got the music and sound great, and the drawings were great to. you could excell at animation, but your use of flash's tweening takes away from the animation. use more manual work, it looks better, lol. my final gripe: cliche. you set the atmosphere great but the story is greatly lacking. what happened to the pixy-girl? why did the king do what he did? "let's skip the little talk" seemed more like "i dont have any words to fill here, lets just cut to the fighting". work with your story. and a final thing...the last fight was predictable. everyone has seem the epic jump-slash-land "oh my gosh, who won?" ::bad guy falls in half::. its old now. develop something new. you can be great.
sad
if it's not funny or needlessly violent it doesnt belong in flash, you tryed to make it too serious and it was a joke, i couldnt even stomach the whole thing, but i guess theres nothing funnier then nerdy flash artists trying to put on cool voices for cool characters, sounds like a cross between mr. blonde and that sloth from ice age, your a joke.
Wow.
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I didn't really enjoy this flash. Sorry, but it seemed a bit cheesy. The storyline was confusing, and I didn't like the artwork very much. Better luck next time. :\
I guess the only thing good about it was the music. I thought it was okay.
bad day
ok i have had abad so i shall start fireing my shit cannon here but stay in guidelines set by web site.
Graphics : (1) anime style does look nice but has be done to death a thousand times over in fact anime is one of if not the dominant forms of animation (2) the coloring base is pretty good but still feels like it was done by some one who is or was starting out (3) the animation i found was very smooth and had no problems that i could find
Style : (1) a old but still good story telling base is hero goes for revenge for brother(s) or friend(s) death or who ever died basicly fights a few undead people usualy skeletons sometimes zombies and one or more mythical monsters gets through the problems fights the main bad guy kills him and dies him self soon after (2) the fighting was nice but seemed to lack various things such as if he was so damn powerful why did he not just enchant his sword makeing it sharp enough to cut through anything or use his power to turn him in to a smear on the wall?
Sound : was good but from what i could read in credits none was done by you other then voices but you used what you had well
Violence :it has violence but not much i find to go above 3
Interactivity : only interactivity maybe emotional for som people and the play button so for basicly nothing real interactive
Humor : it was not ment to be funny and there is no humor