Reviews for Moonlight

[EddieBrock]

Over used themes. . .

First and foremost, I just want to say good job on this flash. As it is, the graphics were great, though the animation was not as good.

I don't know if you knowingly did this; however, putting in naked characters to boost your score/film popularity was rather unclassy. That puts half of your characters as being naked. . . *sigh* For all you young people, life is not all about the nude.

My last comment is that many of the elements in your flash movie have already been used many times before in other movies/films. I would have hoped that you could have been more original in your plot and in your action. Also, next time try to spend more time on your fighting animations because at certain times, it was unclear as to what your characters were doing.

Anyway, I hope you take these things into consideration. Don't forget that the more that you learn, the better things will be later on. You've got time, so use it wisely! Keep up the animating!

[Shigra]

good job

might want to work on the drawing. otherwise it was very well done.

[Ashi-Starshade]

Very good, not perfect

It was mostly good, though the male voices could use a little work. A little more feeling really is what I thought. Seemed like they were just "reading the lines." Also, the gratuitous (attractive) female nudity without gratuitous (attractive) male nudity just made me want to slap you.

[the-beav]

i'm a sucker for eye-candy, but...

the animation skills and ability to draw are all above average, and this movie, visually, was very nicely done. but every single other thing is beyond trite, in all ways: animation, story, dialogue... it's just so stupid. drawing like that is not your own "style" and neither is any anime. it's a canon that is repeatedly copied over and over, lending no individual style. if you're influenced by anime/manga, ok. but incorporate it into your own style, that being something unique to you. also, the whole story was just a collage of other similar stories. a guy wants revenge, sets off alone to fight the villain, is encountered by obstacles, fight scene, fight scene, lather rinse repeat, fight scene..then kill the villain. because he has to. there's no other option, right?. so right away we don't care. it's just not worth reusing yet again. and the dialogue might just be the worst. more borrowing from anime there, with the hero's brief and cocky, yet extremely vague, catchphrases. and why do the heroes always have to do that dumb little laugh before talking? you just wanna slap 'em. or how about yelling "well...?" at unseen bad guys? who does that? is he in a hurry to fight AGAIN? i know i always yell down dark alleys at night, cuz if i'm gonna get mugged on the way home, they better hurry up and do it cuz i'm a busy guy. just work harder next time on your own style, your own story and you should be better off. maybe even a series eventually. if it was something original and interesting, i'd watch more.

[heartlesseyes]

Good.

This is excellent, the graphics and characters are all very interesting... But as far as originality... It doesn't seem original at all. The ending seemed too much like the Gladiator... Good movie! Keep them coming!