How should I start..?
I loved your drawing style, very well done in that department. No worries about that, but there is something you should watch out for... cliches. They are not your friends. Well, only sometimes and in small amounts. I just didn't like that the whole flash was predictable and the out come was what I thought it would be. Yeah, other than that... everything was great. Loved the movement of everyone and the sound was good as well.