Very good.
There are only two suggestions I can make.
One: Make the story line better. It was a good movie, but I didn't feel like I was sympathetic with anyone in it.
Two: Try to improve the voice acting. You did well with everything else. Keep up the good work.
Wow, incredible.
What an incredible movie, one of the best i have ever seen on NG! The knight reminded me of Caim from Drakengard. Great graphics keep up the amazing works Granfaloon!
-Nik
I liked this a lot...
You have the best art style on this site and you are a great story teller. Keep making more movies, man.
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Touching, amazing and unique... :) After "The Real Legend" and "F E A R" I was thinking:
"Man, this dude is up now. No more inspiration, can't make anymore flashes..."
I was wrong. This is a masterpiece :) Try to get a job at a toon studio or something, cause you can make BIG BUCKS with this :) Keep it up, and I'm looking forward to your next submission :D
Greetz,
Hypocritism
Stunning
The graphics struck me the most - they are absolutely incredible! You obviously put a lot of time and effort into each scene. The storyline was very intruiging and interesting, and the end was kind of moving. However, I think a better twist could've been implemented. The combat scenes weren't too bad; especially the final one. The skeleton fight could've been improved because they just fall like flies with no effort whatsoever. I'm not sure if this is to display his great combat skills, but it makes him seem a little overpowered and unbelievable. Oh, and that centaur woman? Nice work! How come when she dies, she is a woman? Is it because she got killed and the curse broke? Yeah... the storyline confuses me a teensy bit. Nonetheless, this is AMAZING work and I would recommend it to everybody. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!