Damn, wow, uh... damn
That was one of the most amazing works of short story animation I have ever seen.
The graphics were well thought out. The story line was involved enough to be interesting but not so much as to overpower the limited budget of time.
I found the fight scenes perfect. Most animators include too many or two few details (losing the audience with vagueness or causing the scene to be too visually heavy). You showed enough to intrigue, holding back slightly to allow one’s imagination to complete the picture.
The only suggestions I could make would be basic convenience factors: play, pause, rewind, forward, scene selection, etc. These features would only serve to enhance the viewing of this work.
I give it 5/5. Keep up the good work.