Could use refining
Hey, first off, good job i can see you put alot of work, time and thought into this animation. And the front page is a good achievement. Some things could have used refining:
1. The bitmaps, i saw numerous bitmaps in your animation which is fine, except they jumped frequently and were almost always pixelated. Trace any bitmap so that it becomes a vector image before you use it and if you need to use a bitmap, dont enlarge it so its pixelated.
2. The animation was quite jumpy and out of sync. When the main character walks he takes tiny steps for the amount of distance he travels. Images jump around alot but other than that it was good.
3. The music was amazing, good job with that, but occasionaly it would end suddenly or it seemed a little off sync.
4. The story is not amazingly original but you did a good job with it. Kudos
I like your style, and if you work on what I said I would gladly love to see more of your work on the frontpage.