You have great potential
I honestly think that you're the most talented artist posting on newgrounds at the moment. This movie, and more so your other recent submission, FEAR, show a much higher level of artistry than the vast majority of portal entries. As many greats however, I do not think you've realized your full potential yet, I sincerely look forward to following your work in the future. My primary comment on this submission is about the sound. Mostly it was great. However, there are a few mistimed footsteps, and there are times when music cuts out suddenly, and it would be nice to have a continuity of sound. I know that's getting nit-picky, but the details are what seperate the greats. Wonderful drawing style, and my compliments on not letting pointless violence take over the story line.