the sword wasn't right.
I don't mean to knit-pick, but he was obviously a knight, and a knight of god no less. his sword's gaurds would have been rather plain, bars thrusting out to the side, so that when held blade down it would form a cross. all knights of a christian or chatholic persuasion did that. that sword looked nicer, but it was wrong. that's my only problem. great work.
execution over concept
This movie does a good job at capturing the theme that its going for and Ill give it a 10 in style for that. Voice acting would have been alot worse if there is more of it, but it stuck to the action so I dont think it hurt the movie at all. For its simplicity, its very well written..
i mean its a lame overdone premise, and felt more like an ending to a movie.. but it was the execution of it, the little intricacies that shaped it together. Memorable moment for me was when he said "ill free you" to the pixie... great writing, I thought I was watching a real japanese anime for a second... i cant stress enough, how much i liked the style and execution of the whole thing. It makes the movie.
Write a whole screenplay, get a couple of better voice actors and christ, you will be living the dream. Please dont ever stop doing this, you have a REAL TALENT in filmmaking.
Suggestion for improvement? Stay away from cliches.. it kind of brought this movie down, but didnt ruin it because it was so short and didnt have room for too many. If you ever make anything bigger, PLEASE PLEASE add as much originality as possible... it will definately topple over any flash movie done to this day.
Killer!
That was awesome! One of, if not, the best flash animation ever. Keep up the good work.
I loved the story, and the animation was almost flawless, the style and graphics in which it was done were also VERY good.
Thanks for a great movie!
Kick Ass!!!!!!
That was one of the two greatest flashes I've ever seen on Newgrounds. I can't remember the other cause so many people input crap but this one should top the charts. The background music was laid excellently next to the superbly rendered graphics and it actually had a plot!!!!! Well fuckin' done!!!!!!!
cool
it was very crunk