What evil kitty said is right. You could have made a beginning few epsodes to show him being so connected to his brotherly knights that have died on the way to stop that evil guy at the end. Put a twist in the story or somethin like the fairy and him fell in love before all this happened, the centaur chick was his sister, or even the dude was his father. Idk this had soo much potential man. Still dramatic and great though. Music was perfect. Everything was great but that big loop hole you've formed.