Awesome!
This was really cool! Liked the design of the hero. The badguy was pretty lame, though. loved the skeleton-part and the Kentaur-part (Or what they're called, those horsemen...?)was pretty cool. The hero could have had a bigger sword. I love big swords!!! Amasing work and I really enjoyed this!!! More of them!!!
Very good, tho very cliché
You had a very good style in it, but a few things
1: In the first fight there were some squences thats seemed choppy and unbalanced
2: Skip the Narotu jumping and the oversized hilt on his sword, those things looks juts silly(even tho it might be cool sometimes) and the hero is ti skinny!
3: Do more damnit! and I need to know the name of the theme that you used in the battle against the King! >: ( Dammit!
It was good.
I just don't like the over used plot. I've seen it a million times.
I give it a 10 for style !
This is my kind of story ! I am all about knights , RPGs and such so this is right up my alley !
very nice
kicked ass it did have that overused thing to it but hey what doesnt?