I loved it!! whats with the second one???
I loved the first one! the second one was dissapointing. here is a remake to banana phone 1!
Banana Phone
Scene one
Song starts…
Lauryn (sitting down at desk, walks over to couch where Jenna is laying down)-what is this?
Jenna- what is what?
Lauryn- The song.
Jenna-what song?
Lauryn-the song playing.
Jenna-Listen I have no idea what your talking about ok?
Lauryn- whatever, just turn it down would ya?
Jenna (sarcastically)- ok pal, I’ll get right on that.
Lauryn- Hah! Banana phone?! Whats that?
Stephanie- banana phone? What are you talking about?
Lauryn- This song, its wicked crazy.
Stephanie (looking at jenna)- what song?
Lauryn- Don’t ask her, she’s being a jerk.
Jenna- you know, sometimes you try too hard.
Lauryn- Crap, Crap! OK its funny but seriously, turn it down!
Stephanie- you guys are weird, I hear no song. Is this some kind of stupid prank?
Lauryn- oh my god! Seriously…. Someone’s got to call the cops!
Jenna- Oh so you want them to turn down for you eh? Do it yourself moron! (throws remote at her)
Lauryn (tries to turn music down with remote)- Ok guys! This is really weird ( scratches head) I’m freaking out now!
Scene two
TEN HOURS LATER
Lauryn is sitting in a corner bopping her head from side to side
Music stops, Camera goes towards jenna and Stephanie who are sitting on couch watching tv.
Music plays, camera goes to lauryn who’s head slowly goes to one side and music stops.
Camera goes to Stephanie and jenna.
Stephanie ( looking at Lauryn)- hey, she stopped twitching.
Jenna - maybe she stopped hearing that song
Lauryn falls to the side, looking unconscious.
Jenna- holy crap! Is she dead?
Stephanie (going over to Lauryn) no, she’s still breathing, call an ambulance.
Jenna- no way!
Stephanie (angrily) what? Why not? She’s gonna die any moment! Oh! You threw that remote pretty hard jenna, pretty hard. Id say this bleeding is pretty consistent, with severe trauma to the head.
Jenna- hey! I didn’t see you do a thing when he was twitching in his own drool , if I were you, (Stephanie hears song) I would listen to what I had to say……..well?
Stephanie- Uhh, ok jenna, sure you do what you have to do, I’ve got to go.
Jenna- oh no, you think im that stupid?
Stephanie- (blocking ears) Shut up shut up! Ive got to get out of here! Crap crap! Ohhhh!!!
Jenna- oh the song, you hear it now too, don’t you?
Stephanie- (walking towards jenna) listen, I wont say a word, this has nothing to do with you jen, just let me call for some help. (touches shoulder)
Jenna- don’t touch me! (hears song) crap ! Now look at what you did! I hear it too! (pushes her against wall) I’m gonna kill you!
Stephanie- Oh no! (runs away)
TO BE CONTINUED
sry everone, i edtited out the swears cuz friends and family
what did u think? email me- stephrizzo702@hotmail.co m