lol its good
but all you people saying " i really like the song" its raffi you idiots, you want to hear wheels on the bus too? its a kids song you morons. well 10-1 who ever says they like the song is 3 to 6 years old any way. enough of my idiot bashing. good job man, but the swaring was not very believable. like when the dude in the tye says "why the fuck not he is going to fucking die" it was an overuse of "fuck" try other words like " why the hell not he is going to die damnit" or "just call you bastard" things like that. "fuck" is so overused, and miss used its not really worth adding unless its believable. theres my $.02