Good idea, bad execution.
Basically, you had a great, great idea. Then you just kind of butchered it by having them have sex at the end. That was totally out of place, out of character, and just out of fucking whack.
The entire idea, the entire motive was just as genius as 1984, for fuck's sake, and then you obliterated it. You shot down a great idea with a bad ending.
Basically, it was great until the end, and for that, I'm giving you shit scores.
I just can't emphasize how disruptive and horrible the end was. You had great comments on society and cliques and modern thinking, and then it just died.