wow
this was... disturbing.... I didn't totally understand it, maybe you could provide an explanation, but i think it had something to do with how your peers can punish you and they can make your life a hell if you do not do what they feel is right or cool, and i think the ending shows that they are teens and are the cool kids by doing the "cool" things, screwing eachother and havin oral pretty much... anyways, deeply thought out, very nicely done, a favorite.