Excellent craftmenship
I can't say much that hasn't already been said. As far as your goal in graphics you were right on the mark. Simplicity, enough to properly represent the concepts you wanted to portray. The Style was limitless. Unique and very attractive. The sound was perfection. The soundtrack you chose fit completely and the lack of loud or obnoxious sound effects increased the movie's psychological effect, especially once the (I'm guessing) protagonist began to get shot. The violence in this film is also excellent; not because it is present and I am glorifying it for the sake of violence, but because it was dealt with realistically. He was in immense pain, mental and physical. The violence was horriffic, and portrayed with a sense of somber appreciation not found in most flash films here. In short, it was not hack-and-slash-then-laugh gore for the sake of gore carried lightly. I didn't find it humorous at all, which is good. It shouldn't be humorous. The film drove its point home with a steely black hammer and didn't have anything to laugh about.
Much applause. Also, I interperate the "panel of trendy robots" to represent possibly a cross between corporate culture and trendy young culture, perhaps intended to illustrate a connection between the two? I certainly see one. Actually, I also enjoyed the scene at the end. Instead of seeing it as running out of ideas, I got the feeling as if you had intended to point out the senseless, meaningless self-fulfilling idiocy of the "panel" and all it represents; the very mindless action, bodily pleasure and apathy towards others (the victim who was killed).
Or maybe you just wanted to show gratuitous sex, I don't know. Either is cool. That's just how I see it.
Please construct more streamlined, hard-hitting films like this. The world doesn't deserve them, but some of us try to appreciate their meaning. Go easy on yourself though, that production process sounds quite harsh. Don't die; we need all the intelligent filmmakers we can get.
