Good idea, just... not carried out well...
I liked the point you were trying to convey. the animation kinda sucked though.... blocks? and the music was terribly annoying...
or the sound.... whatever. backround noise.
the violence was pretty good though, i must admit. i liked the gradients on the needle things...
i dunno. it could use some work... i liked the point. i'll vote 5 for you though.
better luck next time...