Very well done
I am impressed. on this site, there are only seven wntries ive deemed worthy of a revew. four of those were because they sucked so bad that i had to tell the author that it sucked. after you leave school and get some down time, you should seriosly think about being a flash animator. the making a game idea is brilliant, and you are smart not to give in to demands for a sequal. one ting you could have been improved, go over your script. for japanese translation, i understand some sketchyness but you should have made the english text more flush with the rest of the story, even if it's not an exact replication. at least change it on the portal version if its for another project. this was a very good flash and better than most as i am reviewong you have second place of all time on the flash portal. thats not fair, you deserve #1. every day, kind of because im lazy, i vote 5 on this in hopes of getting it first place. peace out.