Left me feeling very satisfied. :)
I can see why you didn't want to make a sequel. I totally agree with your decision on that one. You presented your flash well and you wrapped it up well. It was one nice little story and didn't need a sequel to finish it off.
I have to say at the beginning I was sort of like...ehhhh...but it definitely picked up quick. The fat chocobo totally did it for me. Your Japanese is absolutely beautiful. Great job. :)
And to the idiot below me...it's not in English because it was his final project in JAPANESE. Does no one read the author's comments anymore? Sheeesh.