A seriously awesome submission, no doubt.
Your submission has gained a spot on my favourites list. ;)
At this point in time I'm unable to think of anything to improve "there she is" but I've been wanting to write a review and extend my absolute amazement at your entry :D
"There she is" is sooo cute. No voilence, but it's not necessary of course ;) It's a very well thought out flash, specificially in regards to the storyline and music and how everything (sound, graphics) flows. The style is different, but great nonetheless.
It's also good you have created a part 2, an equally fantastic flash. :) Good luck with future animations ;)