Well,
The graphics were great, mostly, you never saw them run, or really walk, they just hover around mostly or go up and down to look like they are walking. I could barely understand what they were saying, and it took a lot away from the movie. There were parts where I couldnt understand what was happening, and others were the "story" didn't fit right.
I think your on the right track but you have some very empty parts that take down your score. Ciao.