read
I'm feeling particularly malignant today, so I will be a stickler.
get a better mic., add background music, and the lack of a plot, while retaining it as a long movie, making the pointlessness of it all become boring and repetitive by the end of the first minute or two.
...and I hate your art style. Oh well. You get a vote of 2.
P.S. Zombies suck.