A grudge held against former friends has turned into violence. Only 1 fruit can be crowned most eaten in Ameica. Apple has been training for years with his sensai sakaru and is fighting with kalaminjaroo style. Orange is sticking to American karate to play it safe. Could he have been to cocky. Only one way to find out.
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^^Good Points^^
Interesting idea. I don't think its a CC ripoff at all, and it was kind of entertaining for its time. Interesting style of graphics and music.
^^Needs Improving^^
It does need some more length though. You ended this really abruptly, and I'm not really sure I would put "It ends now" in the title, as this was a very unsatisfying ending. Also, white space around edges looks awkward.
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Too short
Well, that's the start, as it really needs to be about 2 minutes longer to get anywhere. There's no blood, no discernable way of telling that the combatants have taken damage and I'd only judge who the winner is, because his opponent has just been thrown off screen.
It looks like a Clock Crew rip off, with Apple and Orange. Just another way of doing it, I suppose. The movements were nice and fluid, which certainly proves that you're capable of moving this project forward.
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coop83 = toughest reviewer EVER
And tell me how the hell this is a clock crew rip off. I mean seriously.
LOL
Remember kids the apple owns
nice idea
but it needs to be a bit longer and it shouldnt stop so abrubtly.
i gave this a 3
word homes
at least its not stick fighters
you know, i wan not incredibly impressed but i enjoy the fact that at least you did somthing a little different then the usual stick figure fights.
elaberate on original ideas like that and see where it takes you.
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