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"City of the Dead: a Bbs story"

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-10 07:34:04


Comments, huzzah :D

Joodah: Best zombie story...that does have a nice ring to it :p And though I'm quite glad you don't seem displeased with the amount of time you had to wait for the latest installment, trust me, you won't have to wait another 3 months for the next one. Srsly.

Sarai: Yes, you seem to have been capped, momentarily, but have no fear: your character is a toughie. Just how tough, however, remains to be seen, trust me. Glad you like the latest chapter, at any rate, and I truly am sorry for having taken so damned long with it.

Sainth: Indeed, I'm striving to get into the thick of things, plot-wise...perhaps the next chapter will be even better, that way. Nice to know you like what I've come up with so far, though :)

Monocrom: If I don't come up with the next chapter before 2009, I will beg you to beat the stuffing out of me, personally. Seriously. At any rate, glad you liked the new installment :D


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-10 16:29:31


I'll up the ante, if you don't come out with a new chapter by the end of MARCH 2008, I will call the Triad's down on you. Every day they'll remove an appendage you don't need until you post :) Since you need your fingers to type story, I guess they'll have to start lower down... if you know what I mean.

Anyway, seriously, great chapter. You've got fans, I really wish I could draw scenes from this, but my imagination works quite well :)

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 09:55:42


At 3/10/08 04:29 PM, Sarai wrote: Since you need your fingers to type story, I guess they'll have to start lower down..if you know what I mean.

But I really like my...toes!

Anyway,seriously,great chapter.You've got fans,I really wish I could draw scenes from this,but my imagination works quite well :)

Glad you liked it :D But seriously, if people started to seriously consider making flashes out of BBS stories, there's a certain someone who makes (and has made, for some time) far better stuff than the fairly predictable junk I chuck into this story, who should probably have dibs on that kind of "honor".

Anyhow, all rear-end smooching aside, let's get on with the next chapter, shall we? :)

Chapter Twelve: Desperate Times call for Nasty Measures

(part one)

"You'll forgive me if I don't take your word on...well, anything you've said so far" said Gagsy, quite convinced that Fyndir and Sarai were merely waiting for the right moment to spring into action themselves, and drawing her own stolen rifle up to bear on the severe traits of the officer's visage.

*BLAM!*

Suddenly, her rifle was no longer hers to use, as Fyndir had moved from the right with lightning quick speed to force her weapon down and out of her hands. The bullet slapped pavement, leaving a smoking, yet totally useless hole in the white floor.

And through it all, the armed guards that faced them hadn't budged. Which meant that they were either worse than the hostiles they'd faced until that moment, or...

"...whoa", said Trunks, grasping the truth. They were too good to make an unnecessary move, having followed each and every movement of both Gagsy's rifle and Fyndir's right arm, and having consequently assessed that neither for the moment was a threat to their safety or that of their commanding officer.

Fyndir just growled, as he let the seized rifle clatter to the ground. "Why the bloody feck d'you think I didn't start blasting people's brains out, girl?"

Gagsy, unsure and confused (and also, considerably scared), looked to the only other authority figure in the group for help. But Sarai simply shook her head, and followed Fyndir's example, slowly letting her weapons fall to the floor as well. "If a trigger happy, fighting-mad Scotsman gives up...trust me, it's best you do the same."

The rest of them followed suit, and (ever so slowly) lowered all the weapons they had on themselves to the floor.

"Good", said the elderly officer, nodding curtly. "Now, my men will proceed to frisk you for concealed arms, and then lead you to your cells, where you will remain as long as I see fit. Do you understand?"

Telling them this was more of a formality than anything else, of course, since five of the armed men had already lowered their weapons and advanced upon the small band of survivors, checking them all over for hidden weapons, and maintaining the highest degree of professionalism and efficiency through it all (namely, by not taking advantage of their position to frisk a tad more than what was necessary with the ladies, even with the scantily clothed, sweat covered Sarai).

They were then instructed to place their hands over their heads, and march outside the door that their assailants had opened earlier, single file, closely watched each step of the way by at least a dozen men.

"Soooo...mind telling us what you nice folks are up to down here, now that we're all trussed up and ready for solitary confinement and what not?" said Link, attempting to come off in a jocular manner, as they neared a long, cement paved hallway with heavy iron doors on each side. "Or better yet...how come you didn't just save us all the time and effort to get all the way here, all by our lonesome, and come fetch us up at the top yerselves?"

He then gasped in pain, as he was half shoved, half smacked in the small of his back by the butt-end of a heavy rifle for his efforts.

Ignoring his plight completely, the grave faced officer simply gestured towards the two guards covering Sarai, and she was led down a separate corridor. "This one will receive the necessary medical attention, and will be joining the rest of you shortly in your confinement" was all he said, before leaving them himself.

"Hey!" said a considerably irate Fyndir. "You said you'd show us Jade! Bring me to my damned fiancè, you decrepit fuck!"

He, too, was struck in the back for his outburst...but he simply turned around and stared at the man, as if trying to decide whether or not it would be worth damning the consequences and bashing his gas-masked head in with his bare hands.

"That will be arranged further on", came the officer's blunt response, his voice trailing off as he moved alongside Sarai down the adjacent corridor.

Fyndir hesitated for an instant, seemingly impervious to the additional shoves he received for not complying immediately with the guard's indications, but then simply shook his head and moved towards one of the iron doors, behind which a cold, relativley empty cell awaited him, just as identical quarters awaited the rest of them on either sides of the dark corridor.

The others followed suit without hesitation, not wanting to suffer the same punishment Link did (who was still wheazing from the previous blow, apparently not quite so used to physical punishment as Fyndir), and also simply clueless as to what else they could do, besides just follow their captor's orders.

They sat on the thin, small beds on the right side of each of their cells, waiting in silence as the guards that had followed them shut each of their massive cell-doors with a metallic "clack", the locks shutting automatically.

The guards left, probably quite certain that none of them had any concealed jackhammers or bulldozers in their respective trousers, short of which they likely didn't have a snowball's chance in hell at busting out of their fortified cells.

"...dunno 'bout you guys" said Link, gently placing himself on his bed, wincing as his reddened back touched the fabric of the mattress, "but I for one don't mind Miss Sarai goin' off to have some fun with the big, burly fellows in black out there. Least she can't say <<I told you so>>."

"Bit of a shitty silver lining, that" mused Gagsy, leaning her back against the grey concrete wall, arms folded across her chest. "All we need now is a harmonica and some blues, and we're all set."

"Sorry, none of that down here" came a light sounding female voice from down the corridor, presumably through the small bars in the center of yet another iron door. "Not even in this whole country, methinks. And that's even before the whole outbreak and armageddon business."

"Who're you?" piped up Trunks, striving to look out the bars of his door to get a glimpse of whoever else was there along with them.

"Me? I'm either the luckiest or unluckiest bitch of a tourist you can think of, depending on your point of view. But at the time being, I suppose you could just consider me a fellow prisoner" came the answer.

A few footsteps were heard, and then a face popped up from behind the three metal bars of the last iron door at the end of the small corridor. A young, bright-eyed redhead, probably in her late teens, oddly calm looking for a girl her age in her present location and situation, gave those who could see her from their cells a wave.

"Name's Jenkins. You folks can call me Bobby. Or Bob. Just not Booby, please."

"Erm...hi Bobby" said Jen tentatively. "How'd you get involved in this mess?"

Bobby scratched her pale chin, as if musing on the circumstances that led to her current position. "Weeeell, I came over to check out the <<Eternal City>> with some buddies, went for a trip 'round the Colusseum and Saint Peter's, took a stroll down the Tiber, and..." She paused for an instant, as if not sure what happened next, then resumed. "...oh, yeah, ran for my life when some zombies jumped my friends from behind and hid under a bridge for about 2 days, before some dudes in black kevlar-looking shite knocked me out, and brought me down here."

(end of part one)


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 12:40:05


(part two)

"...oh." said Jen. "So I guess it'd be kinda pointless to ask you anything about...wherever the hell we are, considering how you basically just ended up in here?"

"Pretty much, yeah" said Bobby, shaking her head a little. "All I know is that the folks that keep an eye on us in here are specifically trained to deal with human threats, and that the folks that caught me apparently thought I was just a cute zombie...knew I shoulda gotten that goddamned
"Oh, right" said Link. "Cynical hot chick, Bobby. Affectionate hot chick, Jen. Stern hot chick, Sarai. Pregnant, semi-zombified hot chick, Jade."

Fyndir growled. "These cell doors ain't that thick, kid. I'd keep that fool lid shut if I were you."

"...aren't you forgetting someone, anyhow?" said Gagsy, slightly irritated at the exclusion.

"True, true. Smart, bookworm-ish chick, Trunks."

"Oi!"

A bit of laughter all around. But the moment of relaxation and routine picking on Trunks was drawn short by an unexpected distant ruckus, perhaps coming from the right corridor...the very same one Sarai had been brought down a few days earlier.

They all shut up then, listening hard.

*CRASH!*

Something was blown to pieces. Gunfire sounded out throughout the building, as did the frantic yells of Italian soldiers.

"Attenzione, infetti evasi dalla zona di contenimento! Ripeto, evasi dalla zona di contenimento! E' armata! E' arm..."

*BLAM-BLAM-BLAM!*

A few of the voices were silenced. More gunshots, more crashing.

"What the fuck is going on down there?" shouted Gagsy.

Fyndir roared, frustrated and triumphant at the same time. "It's Jade, damnit! She's loose! She's got to be! It's gotta be her!"

Another heavy crash sent tremors through the whole underground edifice.

"Whoa, that sounded like a wall fell down..." said Tigerkitty.

More shouting. The old officer's commanding tones could be heard quite clearly, now. Apparently, the situation was grave enough to warrant his direct attention...but whether or not that was good news for them was anyone's guess.

"Non statevene li' impalati, idioti! Continuate a sparare! Prima che riesca a liberare la donna asiatica...fermatela a tutti i costi!"

"<<Donna asiatica>>" said Trunks. "...that means...<<a sian woman>>."

The typical staccato of the M4 bullet fire was interrupted by the even louder, resounding "BOOM" of a shotgun shot.

"Ritiratevi, ritiratevi alle celle! Non devono liberare i prigionieri, o verremo sopraffatti, maledizione!"

"What're they saying now?" yelped Link in a panic.

"Uhm...they're coming our way" said Bobby in an uncharacteristically low voice.

"Oh. OH. Oh FUCK." said Link.

The lights went out in the other hallway.

"Yeah," replied Bobby. "That's pretty much the long and the short of it."

The hail of gunfire roared closer and closer to their corridor, as did the chaotic shouts in Italian for backup, cover and retreat. Someone had them all on the run...which was a fairly frightful thought, considering how efficient and well-trained the armed men had seemed just a few days earlier.

Then, the elderly officer, smoking Beretta 93R in hand, came 'round the corner at a run, turning from time to time to blast a few shots at whatever was coming at him from behind. He was quickly followed into the light of the prisoner's hallway by four of his soldiers, apparently all that was left of his personal taskforce, who were clearly attempting to retreat in a strategic fashion but seemed too frightened to do so.

The officer shouted at the shaken prisoners: "Get to the back of your cells, now!"

And before they could begin to comply, he reached into an inner pocket of his uniform jacket and extracted a small metallic box, which he flipped open to reveal an equally small blue button, which he triggered with his thumb.

Instantly, the heavy iron doors swung open with surprising speed...and one soldier, not paying enough attention to this particular detail (seemingly more preoccupied with whatever had yet to reach them from the other side of the hallway), was smacked in the back of the head by one of the massive metal plates hard enough to pitch him off his feet and onto the floor several paces from where he stood earlier. He didn't get up.

But the shaken officer apparently didn't care for his men as much as he did for his personal safety. He lunged for one of the open cells, apparently intent on obtainin refuge once inside from whatever had been chasing after him.

Unfortunately, he'd chosen the worst cell in the house. Particularly, the one that a very large, very surly fellow had been pacing around in for the past few days like a caged lion, just waiting for a chance to spring into action.

The tip of Fyndir's army-boot connected with a sickening crunch to the desperate man's jaw, sending him out into the hallway with twice the speed he'd flung himself towards the cell, landing him with a muffled "thud" against the cement wall. The officer sat there for a few seconds, broken jaw keeping him from moaning out loud in pain and torment, seemingly unable to move.

Not to say he didn't try to. But before he did, whatever was responsible for the decimation of his soldiers rounded the other hallway and advanced into the prisoner's area, out of the darkness and into the light.

"Nnnnnnggggggggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaa aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh...."

"Oh, FUCK." whispered several of the prisoners, almost simultaneously.

A blood-covered woman with patches of curly brown hair moved slowly but surely into the hallway, almost falling to the floor with each step...due to the fact that the upper half of her body formed about a 45° angle with the bottom half. The broken, jagged bits of spine protruding from the skin of her back in several places, surprisingly enough, wasn't actually the most frightening deformity that could be seen...that would be the absence of her lower jaw, which made her slashed, blood-smeared tongue seem about twice as long.

Just as slowly as she advanced out of the obscurity of the dark corridor and into the neon lit detainment area, five more impossibly mutilated, white-eyed creatures moved after her, each one looking more blood-soaked and gore-spattered than the next. Oddly enough, they all seemed to be wearing metal cuffs around their wrists...not that it made them particularly less dangerous.

Three of the cannibals (formerly old men themselves, minus the gut that elderly males usually would sport, which in all three of their cases had quite simply been chewed off) moved in on the three remaining soldiers, as the other two (the undead woman that had first moved into the hallway, followed by a teenaged boy with a torn, bite-marked leather jacket, tattered black pants, spiked collar and missing face to match) converged on the injured old officer, who attempted to defend himself with his Beretta best he could.

And he might have survived (for another few seconds, at least), had he not finished his bullets, and forgotten to reload before attempting to leap to safety.

His dying scream was, mercifully enough, muffled by his previously smashed jaw...but the noise, sight ans odor of blood gushing out of his neck and onto the pavement was just as unsettling.

That, and the cries for help and for a swift death coming from the other guards, clearly not trained for combat with creatures that just wouldn't die, amply made up for what the old man could not do, as the undead assailants tore through his jugular.

Fyndir whispered to the others: "Don't. Move. An. Inch." , praying to the sweet Lord that the hideous creatures hadn't noticed their presence yet, as he began to slip as slowly and quietly as he could out of his cell and towards the shiny, metallic instrument that (he hoped) might be able to shut the prison doors, just as the old man had used it to opened them.

Trouble was, the blue button lay on the floor not three feet from the two monsters feasting on the old man...

(end of part two)


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 13:01:44


(part three)

...and apparently, these creatures enjoyed a live meal more than they did a deceased one. Both mangled, corpse-like cannibals turned their blank eyes to their left towards the direction Fyndir, who was a palms-breadth away from snatching the metal case, was crawling from...which meant that they was well within reach of him.

"...fuck" said Fyndir.

"Grrraaaaaaaahhhhhh" said the undead creatures.

And Fyndir raised an arm to defend himself, deciding that he'd rather get infested and shoot his own brains out later on, rather than be instantly mowed down by whatever remained of a mouth of the undead things before him...

...and, with a much louder "BOOM!", both monsters in front of him were suddenly headless, decaying brain-matter all over the floor to their right, the half-eaten man to their backs, and the fairly stunned Scotsman to their left.

For about half a second, he remained motionless, not quite believing what had just transpired. He then looked behind him, ever so slowly, shaking his arm to clear off the bits of skull and pinkish goo from it.

Sure enough, there stood two sweaty, dirty, blood-covered young women, one holding a smoking shotgun, the other a pair of M4's in both hands. Both wore equally messy lime green hospital gowns, both of which had several holes and tears in them. One was blonde, while the other was raven-black.

In short, they were the equivalent to a videogame-loving kid's wet dream.

As it happened, however, they were quite real.

"Hey hun", said Jade simply, lowering her weapons, leaning down to Fyndir and caressing his shocked face lovingly, before planting a wet one on him.

"So, did you hear the good news?"

(end of part three)


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 15:19:38


yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
a new chapter with 105% more action than ever before!*
*this is not a real statistic.
but seriously, good chapter.
anyone who doubted that sarai and jade could take out an entire spec ops group...you've just been proven wrong.

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 15:32:32


At 3/15/08 03:19 PM, Joodah wrote:
anyone who doubted that sarai and jade could take out an entire spec ops group...you've just been proven wrong.

Well, them and a considerable amount of zombies, that somehow got loose ;)


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 15:59:22


Some more comments via PM but public comments:

Plot Comments

i) Zombies get tougher as the days wear on apparently. That's just unfair, the principle of RIP (Rot in peace) should apply!

ii) Hospital Gown? GOWN? No one attempts/does operate on me without serious problems.

iii) Your character obviously reads too many Japanese 'comics' about teachers. :p

iv) How're we going to get out? :( Also, I think Jade needs to be put on ice... just in case... she like turns into something evil!

On Writing

Things are fast moved this time round and you also wrote a lot. I guess that spurs me to write more pscye analysis tonight, in addition it also's a demonstrated commitment, and you save some limbs... for now.

I liked where we've got too now, although I'm waiting for one of the *major* characters to be introduced to everyone, heh. In addition I'd think that you are having fun writing this, which is great. Well I have fun reading it and commenting it, which is great too.

Oh and, for you I've changed my latest news post picture attachment. Check it out in a few mins ;-)

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 23:06:10


Very entertaining chapter. Thanks for the action. :)

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-15 23:17:03


Good.

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-16 16:18:14


Yay, comments :D

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Sarai: Don't worry, the zombie-issue will be solved shortly. I know very well that Zombies can't last long without food (as you may have picked up on during the previous chapters, when our heroes had yet to meet a single one of 'em during their trek through the city, after the odd few days they can't quite seem to remember), trust me.

As for the hospital gown and operation deal...well, someone had to patch up your shoulder, didn't they? ;)

Oh, and the videogame-lover issue isn't limited to my personal character...there's Trunks too >:(

And getting out and checking up on Jade will probably be discussed shortly as well, fear not.

Yes, I know I've moved things along a bit quicker than intended...but damn, I'd rather get to the end of this story before an entire year goes by from the day I posted the first installment :/

Looking forward to those "extra" comments of yours via PM, at any rate :p also, kudos on the account re-do, though it was OK before as well.

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Monocrom: Yeah, I figured a bit of action was due. I know, things are probably moving a tad too fast, but as I said, I'm trying to move things forward here...but I promise I won't do anything too stupid with this story, just for the sake of some timeline.

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Syphonik: Uhm...thanks :D Glad you liked it.

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Update: next week, possibly as soon as Wednesday.


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-16 16:49:15


Man, haven't seen this in awhile. It's certainly grown.


"Let's kick this mothafucka's ass all over dream land!"

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-16 17:59:48


That was some hella fast moving asskicking there, what with only a couple paragraphs elapsing between Sarai being taken away for medical treatment, and coming back with guns, Jade, and zombies. It's definately a nice change to have updates before I even have a chance to check the thread, and thanks for the notification Link.

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-16 18:17:28


Damn.I cant wait for the next chapter.I hope everyone makes it out alright.


Bringing back old shit.

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-16 19:15:25


At 3/16/08 06:17 PM, lawlmaster wrote: Damn.I cant wait for the next chapter.I hope everyone makes it out alright.

What fun would that be.

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-17 17:10:22


At 3/16/08 06:17 PM, lawlmaster wrote: Damn.I cant wait for the next chapter.I hope everyone makes it out alright.

Everyone except the Zombies right? Uhh, wait, this is a zombie story, *someone* dies, other than the cast of supporting soldiers and so forth...

*,moves to one side,*
I get killed in every story except Monocrom's original so far, (well it was never quite clear...)

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-17 18:09:54


At 3/17/08 05:10 PM, Sarai wrote:
Everyone except the Zombies right? Uhh, wait, this is a zombie story, *someone* dies, other than the cast of supporting soldiers and so forth...

Possibly. Possibly, we'll have to explore different aspects of the term "death". You'll just have to wait and see :D

I get killed in every story except Monocrom's original so far, (well it was never quite clear...)

Naw, you were fine, in the 5 Kings story. Pretty much the only Vamp to get outta there alive, if memory serves.


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-25 09:25:54


At 3/15/08 12:40 PM, LinkSilvermane wrote: "Cynical hot chick, Bobby. Affectionate hot chick, Jen. Stern hot chick, Sarai. Pregnant, semi-zombified hot chick, Jade."

Sounds like the main characters from Sex and the City.

Anywho.....very well put together story, an enjoyable read but for the LOVE OF GOD I AM NOT GINGER! I'm dirty blonde >: (


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-25 10:29:33


Woah.

I just read this entire story, and it's awesome. Zombies, Women with Guns, and a Conspiracy? Bookmarked.

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-25 18:11:43


At 3/25/08 10:29 AM, Sheepshifter wrote: Woah.

I just read this entire story, and it's awesome. Zombies, Women with Guns, and a Conspiracy? Bookmarked.

The whole story *is* awesome dear. Well done for finding it :) PM some guys you know if you want and send them this way, :) Link's very good :D

Looks around for Zombies

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-26 05:24:53


Last comments I'll be replying to...should be able to get another chapter in by later today.

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BobbyJenkins: Erm, the only time I actually ever went and watched that show, some fireman was busy screwing a blond 40-something-year-old chick.

Which is when my mom walked in the room, incidentally :/

At any rate, I'm quite glad you've managed to read what I've come up with so far, and more so that you seem to enjoy it :D

Oh, and about the hair color...hey, it's a zombie-story! >:( For example,my hair happens to be kinda short as of late, but it's long and curly in the tale. Also, I kinda doubt that Fyndir actually is over six feet tall and gawd-knows-how-many-hundreds-of-pounds, in "real life". Yet, in the story, he'd probably freak out the Undertaker.

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SheepShifter: The fact that you would bother yourself with catching up with the entire story is, in itself, high praise. So thanks :D I'm quite glad you like what I've come up with so far...expect more.

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Sarai: ...'kay, that's the first time I've blushed on the internet.

Thanks very much for the support :D

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Right, so like I said, I'll be getting on it later this afternoon...and I'll be posting whatever I come up with, be it half a chapter or the whole thing.


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-26 06:15:10


So the story is abotu zombies rigth

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At 3/26/08 05:24 AM, LinkSilvermane wrote: Oh, and about the hair color...hey, it's a zombie-story! >:( For example,my hair happens to be kinda short as of late, but it's long and curly in the tale. Also, I kinda doubt that Fyndir actually is over six feet tall and gawd-knows-how-many-hundreds-of-pounds, in "real life". Yet, in the story, he'd probably freak out the Undertaker.

Hehe yeah I get you....just being ginger....it's a Scottish thing. Fyndir will know where I'm coming from with this.


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-27 14:08:52


At 3/26/08 06:15 AM, q13qew wrote: So the story is abotu zombies rigth

hold still, i need to set your legs on fire.

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-03-28 05:27:49


Sorry it's taken me a while to read this Link. I had to go back and read from the beginning to remind myself what was happening. Not your fault, just my terrible memory! =O

I'm so glad that you have continued writing this, I was worried after the long break but you're certainly back in the swing of things, and I'm hooked. =)

Keep up the awesome work.

Also, are the diary type enteries you started doing at the beginning of the story dead and gone? =[

[I've been wandering round but I still come back to you]

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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-04-02 23:43:49


Sweet, just re-read the whole thing... and this would make a sick book.

I loved it. Great job man.


wew

Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-04-03 05:07:17


Warhawk V 1.3 is out guys.
Good times :D


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-04-03 05:08:23


Oh for the love of..
Wrong thread >=(
Sorry, to many tabs open!


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-05-01 06:29:58


Wow i haven't been on newgrounds for a long period of time, I have some reading to do no doubt.


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Response to "City of the Dead: a Bbs story" 2008-06-27 13:06:36


I love this story, and I'll be dissapionted if it is, but is this going anywhere, i mean its been what.. almost 4 months since the last chapter was posted?
Is anything going on, behind scenes?


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