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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-04 20:25:16


Glad to see so many are up for this.

At 4/4/07 04:36 PM, Abs55 wrote: We need atleast 5 people for this collab.

Why?

If you want to participate in this collab, please put your name down in this thread, and if we get enough people, we will start a new thread.

good plan

May as well have 2 seperate threads for the different parts. I reckon it'd merit it.

At 4/4/07 06:39 PM, Imacow wrote: I'll make a part for the collab. What is the theme?

If it were to be me and Abs taking charge of the 2 separate parts, I don't know how Abs would run his half, but my half would be totally different to a normal 'collab'.

I posted my script a couple of pages back. I'd ask participants for input on the script, try and find some suitable 30-45s-ish segment of music (or see if anyone else could find something better), then I'd do a rough, ask for opinions, then maybe make a new thread, split it up into parts (divided by subject rather than time - so folk would share screentime), then folk would take the .fla I'd created in Flash 5, animate over it (using anything up to v8) then I'd take the parts, do a lot of cutting and pasting, then compile it in Flash 8.

And there's be an ending where every reviewer here who hadn't gotten there in time or didn't feel totally confident of doing a more prominent part could make an mc of themselves, for a sorta 'flight of the superheroes' kinda thing.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-04 21:24:14


BAH. Just wondering if I sould get a few reviews for this, as I <3 reviews. And yes, I was the one that submitted.


I still haven't forgiven the asians for pearl harbor.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-04 23:07:43


At 4/4/07 09:24 PM, yodd wrote: BAH. Just wondering if I sould get a few reviews for this, as I <3 reviews. And yes, I was the one that submitted.

Done, nice collab.


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-04 23:09:51


Sorry for double post.

Bezmen, I think your idea is pretty cool. So will you tell us what to animate or do you just want us to make whatever we want?


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 06:04:20


At 4/4/07 09:24 PM, yodd wrote: BAH. Just wondering if I sould get a few reviews for this, as I <3 reviews. And yes, I was the one that submitted.

Nicely done, I've reviewed, please respond, as I <3 responses


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 10:01:08


I reviewed to most of the flashes, I did:

Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 1 by Jimtopia
NG:Cd Cover Collab by Volit0
IDZ REMIZ by Volit0
My Last Flash Ever! by Bahamut

Authors could you respond to the reviews. I was busy this week so I didn't get that much time to do reviews. If I get time, I'll do the other two I missed out.

By the way, all users who want be a part of the reviewers collab for this club, could you PM me, so I know exactly how many of you want to do this.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 13:41:03


At 4/4/07 11:09 PM, Imacow wrote: Sorry for double post.

Bezmen, I think your idea is pretty cool. So will you tell us what to animate or do you just want us to make whatever we want?

Assuming Milinko and others are cool with me taking charge of that half, I'd pretty much just let folk pick one or two elements of their own choice.

Everyone would have to wait until I send them the .fla, so they can animate over the roughs I make and it'll then all slot in to make a funky whole.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 15:01:16


I SAID: Yeah sure I'll join the collab just don't give me a big part.


cos shotgun bullets are bad for yo health.

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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 15:05:49


can i join

i mean seriously i see these different groups and have yet to get into one... and this one makes since... cause my animation got a 1 and yet everyone tells me its funny...

so if you want to let me join... let me know

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 15:58:41


At 4/4/07 08:25 PM, Bezman wrote: Glad to see so many are up for this.

At 4/4/07 04:36 PM, Abs55 wrote: We need atleast 5 people for this collab.
Why?

I don't know, I just came up with a figure that I think is a good number for this collab.


May as well have 2 seperate threads for the different parts. I reckon it'd merit it.

Good idea, I'm going to start another thread once I get enough people.

Also, Bezman let me know if there is a little part that I could do in your half of the collab. I think that we should finish everything on May 14th like you said and make a menu and post it by May 15th.

My idea for the reviewers side in detail:

An intro so like the name of the club, the founder etc (brief so far)

Part 1:
A person is reviewing a flash. On stage, it shows a person in his bedroom and is looking at a computer screen and moving the mouse.

Part 2:
It shows the computer screen and letters are being typed in to a review and then the cursor on stage moves and clicks on submit.

Part 3:
It then, zooms out of the computer to show another person in a different bedroom (this shows that more than person does this) and zooms into the window and shows the sky outside. The sun is in one corner and moves across the sky and then it turns to night and the moon goes from one corner to another. The sun comes up again to show that a day has passed.

Part 4:
Now the camera zooms out of the window into another room and shows a third person looking at a computer screen and is suprised.

Part 5:
It shows the computer screen and on it, it shows a persons members area and zooms in on to the responses which is 0.

Part 6:
Then it shows the room again and the screen splits into 3 sections and it shows the different people looking at the computer screen and say no one appreciates my reviews.

Part 7:
I'm not sure yet how this will be. In this part, a person (one of the three) finds out about review request club. An idea, I had is by the character looking at someone elses review and noticing the review request club sign at the bottom. But, If anyone has any ideas how they find out about the club, fell free to share them and if you wish, you could do the part or give it to someone else.

Part 8:
After one of then finds out, it shows the reveiw request club thread and shows someone who typed in something like 'could someone review my new flash and audio and I will definetly respond.

Part 9:
Now the camera shows a person in a bedroom and the stage splits into 3 like before and they all click on the link at the same time (or something similar) and say something like 'I finally found my place on newgrounds.

Part 10:
Shows all review request club members who participated in the collab and some who are in the club but didn't do anything because there weren't enough parts or weren't that good in flash. Here everyone who wants to, can make a image of their face and I'll put it on, just to show the many people in the club. Then, the credits come up.

What does everyone think of the guideline? I am making the preloader, the intro and part 10 (once I get all the images).

The parts that are available are:

One person can do part 1 and 4.
One person can do parts 2, 5 and 8 as they are all computer screens scenes and this shows the same styles.
One person can do part 3, which is quite big so only experienced flash users for this please.
One person can do part 6 and 9 as they are the same style.
One person or people can do part 7 but the person who gets the idea gets first chance to do it if they wish to.

So all in all, I need 5 or 6 people to do this collab. If you wish to do, just post in this thread and when all the parts are taken, i'll make a new thread with all the details such as stage size, frame rate etc.

Also, can someone find suitable music for this collab in the audio portal? It will be appreciated! So what does everyone think of the plan?

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 16:00:49


im down with helping...

lets get it started

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 16:16:52


ok so ive got some free time tomorrow mornging... i could nock it out fairly quick if you got the symbols arleady made... if not... it will take longer... i am not picking on what part i work on... but i if i need to make the symbols i would rather you let me know which part to work on and how you want them to look cause it is your idea...

well shoot me a pm or something so we can get this rolling

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 16:26:41


At 4/5/07 04:00 PM, crowdedheadspace wrote: im down with helping...

lets get it started

ok. which part do you want to do and send me a rough example of what you are going to do. Its just that I don't know your experience in flash and your submission got a low score so I just want to see if your capable of the job or not?

I think that a batting average of 2.8+ or a score of 2.9+ on a submission is needed to do this collab or if I let them to do it. Anyone up to the job is welcome to participate.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 16:29:16


oh for part 7....

its just a thought...

person number three could be god... to represent the fact that even god thinks the review request club is a good thing...
and god could go... "man i wish some one would review my flash..." or have god say ... "man i wish there was a review request section" or just make god mumble for a minute and type something...

then the other guys could see the link and then they both at the same time say... i just found my place at new grounds...

then god could say.... hey jesus see this is why they call me hi and mighty... and jesus could holler fromt he other room...
shut up dad me and noah are playing battle ship... and noah could say... dam you sank my (either cruiser or carrier)

thats just if you wanted it to be funny... i didnt know if you were going for a more serious look or humorus....

either way i would like to help
just let me know what you need help with... if you even need help still

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 16:45:07


At 4/5/07 04:26 PM, Abs55 wrote:
At 4/5/07 04:00 PM, crowdedheadspace wrote: im down with helping...

lets get it started
ok. which part do you want to do and send me a rough example of what you are going to do. Its just that I don't know your experience in flash and your submission got a low score so I just want to see if your capable of the job or not?

I think that a batting average of 2.8+ or a score of 2.9+ on a submission is needed to do this collab or if I let them to do it. Anyone up to the job is welcome to participate.

ok well no offense to the idea that a voting rate is realy any clue to how good a flash work is on this site...
i have seen many flash animations and stop action animations that are just pointless and are rip offs of other people and none of the symbols or even noises(i say noises cause there not words or music or sound effects) that score in that range... yet i have seen animations that are funny and very well done that get blammed just because of who they are...

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 17:19:37


At 4/5/07 04:29 PM, crowdedheadspace wrote: oh for part 7....

Very nice idea for part 7, nice way to put god in it but I didn't really want person no. 3 to be god. However, adapting to your idea, it could be god in the sky, just saying I might as well help them and then points his finger and sparks come out of it and then on the people's computer screen, the review request club page in the forum loads up.

then god could say.... hey jesus see this is why they call me hi and mighty... and jesus could holler fromt he other room...
shut up dad me and noah are playing battle ship... and noah could say... dam you sank my (either cruiser or carrier)

Going off topic a bit but we could still put it in for humor points.

At 4/5/07 04:45 PM, crowdedheadspace wrote: ok well no offense to the idea that a voting rate is realy any clue to how good a flash work is on this site...
i have seen many flash animations and stop action animations that are just pointless and are rip offs of other people and none of the symbols or even noises(i say noises cause there not words or music or sound effects) that score in that range... yet i have seen animations that are funny and very well done that get blammed just because of who they are...

I just suggested this as higher scored submissions usually have better graphics and animation which is a need for this collab. I didn't mean to offend you or anything like that, it was just a way to judge the talent. After I get some more people who want parts, i'll get back to you and tell you what part you could do.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 17:35:54


trust me it didnt offend me in any manner...

i was just putting up a valid point... i know my animations arnt up to par... but i also know that this sites voting has gone out the window... some times its good but other times people just vote zero so they can get dark status...

well im glad you like the ideas i gave you and i think the idea of god zapping down to earth is pretty good to...

now my question is how much money am i going to get for coming up with this idea...

just kidding

i would love to do the god zapping earth or jesus playing with moses... if you want this weekend (depending on my drinking habits being that a 24 year old nerd has to drown his sorrows out some how... hahahaha) if i cant get any of it done tomorrow to show you what i got then maybe saturday ill send ya something... possible a ruff draft... i dont want to do any voices because i am very picky on the fact that i do all my voices for all my skits...

well im off to go get drunk... go good friday for its ability to get me out of work tomorrow... wooo whoooo

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-05 18:15:43


I don't know if theres a rule that it has to be out of the portale before you review it but here you go.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/372250


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 11:53:07


well since i am going to start doing stuff in this crew... can i get some reviews. i have had this video out for about a week and only got 1 review... and its quit disapointing to have a boat load of votes but no reviews... plus the only review doesnt match up with the votes... the review shows an over all 7 out of ten... but the votes show 1.6 ... ouch
well please help if ya can with a review...

keep in mind this is my first toon and since then i have gotten alot better

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/370440

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 14:21:24


At 4/5/07 06:15 PM, xthesnarfx wrote: I don't know if theres a rule that it has to be out of the portale before you review it but here you go.

No, that's how submissions which get blammed give feedback to the authors

At 4/6/07 11:53 AM, crowdedheadspace wrote: well since i am going to start doing stuff in this crew... can i get some reviews.

Sure, I've left you one there.

Can you guys do me a favour and take the conversation about this flash elsewhere? I know it's a collab by the members of the RRC, but I'm not taking part in this and although I applaud your efforts, I'm trying to use this club for its primary function - finding people who want reviews and giving them what they want.

Now that you know who's interested, you can take it to IM programmes or NG PMs

Thanks


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 14:47:55


At 4/6/07 02:21 PM, Coop83 wrote: Can you guys do me a favour and take the conversation about this flash elsewhere?

Agree'd, It's getting hard to follow whats going on. Someone should put up an invisonfree or something and move discussion there.


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 14:54:22


Can you review this

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 16:18:24


At 4/6/07 02:47 PM, Imacow wrote:
At 4/6/07 02:21 PM, Coop83 wrote: Can you guys do me a favour and take the conversation about this flash elsewhere?
Agree'd, It's getting hard to follow whats going on. Someone should put up an invisonfree or something and move discussion there.

How about here?

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 16:23:11


I'm back from a flash hiatus. Not really, I've been struggling to find voice actors.

I may be back tommorow.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/372380

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 16:42:58


At 4/6/07 02:54 PM, MaxusBlam wrote: Can you review this

Well, I did review this back in August 2006 - are you in some way connected to StrangeClock?

At 4/6/07 04:23 PM, IZSBHR wrote: I'm back from a flash hiatus. Not really, I've been struggling to find voice actors.

I may be back tommorow.

I've reviewed this, so please give me a response


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 17:12:00


sorry if i'm posting too many requests too fast but my newer songs could need a bit more feedback :)

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 18:21:39


At 4/6/07 04:18 PM, Bezman wrote: How about here?

Singed up, but their is nothing there to post on =(


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 18:48:01


At 4/6/07 02:21 PM, Coop83 wrote: Can you guys do me a favour and take the conversation about this flash elsewhere? I know it's a collab by the members of the RRC, but I'm not taking part in this and although I applaud your efforts, I'm trying to use this club for its primary function - finding people who want reviews and giving them what they want.

Sorry for any confusion that I have made. I have made a new thread for this now in the flash forum. :)

At 4/6/07 04:18 PM, Bezman wrote:
How about here?

Thanks for the offer Bezman, but I think it might be easier for newgrounds users to post on newgrounds and more people will be aware of it. The link to the new thread that I have made for this collab is:

Reviewers collab

So anyone who is interested please go there.

Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 23:24:56


Yo can i join?
...For both sides, i like to get reviews and i like to give reviews...good reviews.


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Response to Review Request Club 2007-04-06 23:34:46


Okay, here's a flash I just submitted, It's a recreation of the Ng audio portal. It would be awesome if I could get some reviews from you guys.

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic.php?id=48 3448

Thanks.


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