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Newgrounds' Poem Competition...

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-03 12:19:15


My cock is a mountain
Like a river he flows
Over shemale like bridges
and into some hoes.

I love the warm scent
Of my cum dripping down
Into the mouth
of a bitch with a frown.

I penetrate the ass,
The mouth and the pussy.
My veiny hard cock
Pleasuring Lucy.

I love when this happens
I love how it feels
Having sex with a hoe
For her next warm meals.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-03 12:27:46


Neojason has been excluded for a little while.


The Newgrounds O-Ren-Ishii but with a nicer smile and still alive

Got Rice?

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-03 12:37:49


At 12/3/05 12:27 PM, Sarai wrote: Neojason has been excluded for a little while.

Good, we have been working for a while to make it happen (Mostly Bahamut7). Thanks. =)

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:18:58


Tomorrow is the last day everybody.

Make sure to write an entrance before it is too late!

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:23:21


A path winding across the horizon
over mountains, across seas
through blue skies and gray
never ceasing, continuous.
My love for you.


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:26:00


As I was leaving my house yesterday
I came upon a mouse on the way
That mouse I say
Had a louse I say

That lickity splickity mouse

its about love!

DigDugz, fighting communism and idiocy since 1991.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:28:47


Baby with me you can not go wrong,
Our love will continue shining like the sun.
With me you will not find misery,
We will celebrate every anniversary.

P.S. i am only 12 and i wrote this by myself.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:37:14


At 12/4/05 12:28 PM, strawberryjam-clock wrote: P.S. i am only 12 and i wrote this by myself.

Good good, but seriously age does not matter that much.

I wrote a 200 pages story when I was seven years old. With just a little imagination and creativity, you can do almost anything. =)

Anyways, remember that you are allowed to make two entrances.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:38:14


At 12/4/05 12:37 PM, Andersson wrote: Anyways, remember that you are allowed to make two entrances.

I did. But neither were about love :(
I cant write things forced. They just pop into my head.
This is the best thread to post them in though.


DigDugz, fighting communism and idiocy since 1991.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 12:57:58


Ok i have incresed it from last time.

I saw you walking through the park,
Where squirrels were scratching against bark.
You gave me a quick wink,
Lucky i did not blink.

I saw you again the next day,
Sitting where beautiful flowers lay.
I plucked up my courage and did moan,
Asked you for the number of your telephone.

I called you and asked you on a date,
When you said yes i felt great.
I met you at the corner of a street,
And gave you flowers and delicious sweets.

After many dates we have had,
You asked me to meet your mum and dad.
I found out you were a stripper,
When we had with them some dinner.

You thought that I with you was mad,
After I was told your proffession by your dad.
I said "This is great,
You should of told me on our first date."

Soon we had intercourse,
I rode you like a horse.
You shouted "Harder, shag me harder.",
Soon I was a dad.

You gave birth to a baby boy,
And we showered him with joy.
Six months after the birth,
We got married in Perth.

Years rolled past with no misery,
And we enjoyed our 50th anniversary.

But soon I caught a life threatining disease,
Which started to attack at the knees.
And now i'm on my death bed,
And with my very last breath i'll give you these words.

I love you.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-04 19:34:05


my tears streem down me
drowning my enemies
and carressing my friends
my emotions are unjustified
my reasoning cryptic
i cannot be mollified
this is the end

dedicated to Miikro and Sarai's children.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 02:43:42


Okay, the competition is still open.

I will pfficially close this with a post later today (Monday).

So work harder people. =P

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 02:51:18


At 12/5/05 02:49 AM, StarF68 wrote: Don't close it too early. :P

Nah, no worries. In a couple of hours mean like 10 or 12 hours. =)

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 02:54:43


A Smile

When we go to see her,
She forces a smile onto her face,
Just for us.
Struggling with a disease,
That we all know will conquer her in the end.
Above that face is the top of a head,
Bald and smooth from chemo therapy.
No hair up there,
Chemo therapy has taken it all away.
Good times we have had,
Like going on vacation together,
Or going to the movies.
But now those times have ended,
Taking away a grandmother, a wife, a mother,
A teacher(with a perfected teacher look to quiet her students)
And a friend.
Now all of these things she can no longer be,
Because a certain disease called cancer,
Has taken her life away.

-In loving memory of my Grandmother. Whom I love.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 03:03:22


And you may not care, but I made people cry with that. My grandmother was buried with a copy of it. Im also only 12.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 03:12:07


And why does everybody want me banned? Im smarter than the avg. person. I prob. know things you dont. The SAT was already easy for me (Im in CTY program. Look it up.) I can handle content here. I played Half-life at like age 6-7. HL is rated M.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 03:19:15


ABCDEFG
HIJLKMNOP
QRSTUV
WXYZ

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 03:22:11


At 12/5/05 03:19 AM, BlisteringFreak wrote: ABCDEFG
HIJLKMNOP
QRSTUV
WXYZ

Can you run that by me again? Lol {:-D

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 04:45:15


I don't know, the idea just kinda popped into my head and I worked from there.
I think it's wierd, to tell the truth.

A blessed smile such as this
Cannot amount to an angel's kiss
A memory I share and miss
Never shall her smile lose its bliss

But memories, while hold they may
I'd prefer that she had stayed
But she is gone, my love at bay
And I mourn having met with that day

Now I'm haunted with her face
Wandering, searching for its grace
Through darkened corners for her embrace
With increasing panic, increasing haste

All my love shall be for her
No more, now, shall I cower
At her memory, may it last forever
And may I never lose her

But truth has always worked its way
To keep my yearnings far at bay
Always shall an image stay
But truth it can never keep at bay

She is gone, and I am lost
My sanity comes at a terrible cost
I fight to prevent insanity
Despite what truth has thrown at me

But control is slipping out of reach
I am now held on a leash
The doors of sanity have been breached
My control, in vain, has now ceased

For you I struggle, but all in vain
For you I struggle though this pain
For you I struggle to stay sane
...Mother... don't let my struggle be in vain...

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 14:05:45


I am soon not giving you any more time to post your contributions.

But maybe Tim (Who I see is visiting the General forum section probably for his first time) will be able to post a little love poem before it. ;-)

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 14:58:54


Hope you liked it :)

/me sends flowers to the judges


The Newgrounds O-Ren-Ishii but with a nicer smile and still alive

Got Rice?

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 15:43:54


Here I am drowning in my tears
No one knows the secrets I'm hiding
All my dreams became my fears
The bottle is empty but these feelings keep breeding
I couldn't look myself in the mirror
To see the monster I have become
I can't bear to meet my demons
I hear voices screaming but I am too numb
I have urges to take out my frustration
So I take a knife thinking it'll dull the pain
I take a second thought and stop my actions
There must be another way to remove this strain
The thoughts are razor sharp
And they continue to pierce my mind
My eyes are burning red
And I feel I'm going blind
Then I see you standing there
Watching every movement you do
I was never prepared
To feel this way, I think I love you
I know it'll make me feel right
Watching as I clapse at the light
You are the lanturn to seek me through
You are the path that leads me too
Because of you there is no more misery
Because of you I am no longer blind to see
For everything you've helped me through
I feel entitled to you, I feel in love with you

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 16:20:58


My second submission.

I need your love to ease my pain,
like a calm and cool summer rain.

I need your love to get me through
all of the moments that I'm not with you.

Your love is like wonderful weather,
because it's sunny every time we're together.


I'm gonna go back to my room and be awesome.

Desert Punk of the NG /A/|My VA Demo Reel|Audio Portal|

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-05 19:26:53


At 12/5/05 02:05 PM, Andersson wrote: I am soon not giving you any more time to post your contributions.

But maybe Tim (Who I see is visiting the General forum section probably for his first time) will be able to post a little love poem before it. ;-)

How long will it take to make a judgment? And what criteria will be used?


Fun: THAT IS THE BENEFIT OF DIPLOMATIC IMUNITY!

To think about the world, click cat.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-06 06:08:14


At 12/5/05 07:26 PM, Vertigo200 wrote: How long will it take to make a judgment? And what criteria will be used?

I will officially close the competition in one (1) hour.

No more contributions will be accepted after that.

The next round will continue in a new thread (I will post a link to the next thread in here later) and judgment may take one day (This Monday that is depending on when the judges send me their votes). Those judges who have not sent me their vote by today will not have their vote included in the first round (To not keep the next round on delay).

We judge the contributions after effort, whether they have followed the rules and mostly if there is an intention behind the poem, if the poem strike it's readers and so on.

Anyways, good to get some questions to keep it clear for you.

Just ask and you will recieve an answer.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-06 06:14:18


Right, i'm making another entry

Oh where was my cheese?

I woke up this morning and went to my fridge
Thereupon my cheese was lost
I searched for it high, i searched for it low
But sadly, it was to no cost

I decided it might be in the front room
So i trotted in there to see
But all i could spy was crackers from before
No chedder, stilton or brie

I thought 'how peculiar' and looked in the cupboard
No luck, no sign, no trace
I only had it last night, i remember it well
Although i was off my face

By now i was trembling, my eyes were fierce
As i needed my dairylea fix
I demanded to know who had taken my cheese
and replaced it with a twix

Now i lie down, sweaty and white
As was the edam i'd once had before
Losing conciousness now.....my eyes start to close
When all of a sudden......on the floor

I spotted a crumb of sweet gorgonzola
An amazing sight to my eyes
A fingertip away i reached with my might
To grab my cheesy prize

The cat............
Inches away.........

I pulled myself up from my terrible state
and heaved myself onto the side
Startled the cat, and away it ran
The cheese would have been mine......but i died

So how'd i write this? MAGIC

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-06 07:29:34


And there we were.

The first round of the "Newgrounds' Poem Competition" is over. No more contributions will be accepted.

The next round will start later, a link to that thread will be posted in here by me later when the judges has turned in their votes.

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-06 07:47:50


Not another poem!
Ok fine!
I'll read it, but this is the last time!!!

Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-07 18:43:57


At 12/6/05 06:08 AM, Andersson wrote: Just ask and you will recieve an answer.

Ok, then when will the results be in? The judges see to be taken a while (which is actually a good thing, probably, since it means you're stopping and thinking).


Fun: THAT IS THE BENEFIT OF DIPLOMATIC IMUNITY!

To think about the world, click cat.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition... 2005-12-07 18:56:22


There once was a man from Nantucket.................


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