I think my stories that I put in the LNL would make great flash films. Although I'd like to work on a big collaboration project with you guys. Yeah... We should do that.
At 10/28/04 10:00 PM, Snerd wrote: I think my stories that I put in the LNL would make great flash films. Although I'd like to work on a big collaboration project with you guys. Yeah... We should do that.
We really should.
We should all start putting forth ideas to create and write a story and/or script togethor.
At 10/28/04 10:11 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:At 10/28/04 10:00 PM, Snerd wrote: I think my stories that I put in the LNL would make great flash films. Although I'd like to work on a big collaboration project with you guys. Yeah... We should do that.We really should.
We should all start putting forth ideas to create and write a story and/or script togethor.
ok well if u guys are interested feel free to ask about my comics k?
I dropped out in the third grade, and spent all my time at the arcade.
At 10/28/04 05:14 PM, Frozen_Fox wrote:At 10/28/04 05:11 PM, G-MAN490 wrote:this has been suggested but no one has come forward with anything to a cctually use as an idea. If you could tell me what exactly your idea is in detail its possible we could be able to find a talented animator and everypne hear in the guild would be willing to help out with the script casting etc.
well so far it's about a guy (pictured on the poster) who wakes up with no memory on the street, he soon finds out he is a vampire, is skilled in the art of ninjitsu, and can move faster than a bullet if he tries. he finds this out by brawling with a bunch of vampire hunters in a bar, I cut this fight scene from the comic to conserve time, plus I am kinda lazy. anyway he also finds out he has a $50,000,000 bounty on his head, bye searching one of the vampire hunter's pockets he finds a mysterious note. I'll explain the rest tomorrow but I gotta go right now.
I dropped out in the third grade, and spent all my time at the arcade.
Hello people. I'm a writer of flash stories, with no flash skill what so ever. If there is anyone there would is looking for a script to make let me know. The first one I want to be made is the History of the NG Vampire Empire.
Must be off now get back to writing my screenplay.
Top of the morning to ya all.
Anyone is welcome, you can post your script here if you feel the need to gather more interest.
Now, this is a club for both animators and writers, so if anyone has a flash movie on NG that they think is well written and is not in the top 50 (and maybe deserves a spot) then why not post the link here with the title and your comments.
No harm done...
At 10/29/04 10:30 AM, GhostMint wrote: For the record, I have officially joined this club.
Ya welcome... thanks for joining the team.
As of now, we are brainstorming togethor and combining our talents to come up with an intriguing short story or script. I will posting some ideas sometime this weekedn that i have.
I just have to scavange up some old .doc files. However, feel free to post your own ideas.
I am posting to pick up some slack.
This is an Ad i have been posting i nthe general section and flash section of the BBS. If I see a specific thread that is real busy i will post it there and then i will post it in its own thread.
So if you want to do some advertising... here it is:
Join the Writer's Guild... a place to discuss ideas/concepts... hire writers, brainstorm, etc. Anything to do with the plot, script, and storyline of your flash can be discussed here.
Many writers have joined and want to help make amazing flash movies.
I personally write for two newspapers, one site (by Jan 1/05 it will be two) and a magazine. I am no joke. And I do not feel any of my current members are.
We need support. This is the third club dedicated to writers and it again is starting to die off. The Writers of NG need support and need to gather.
YES, animators are welcome to brainstorm, hire, post ideas and concept and maybe find a collaborative partner.
i would like to join if it isn't to late, i can't animate and i can't draw but i sure got a thing for writing. most of my stories are about romance, sadness or hatred i truly don't know why but they mostly are. since i can't make a flash on my own i sure would like to take advantage of this club so if it's okay with you i'll post my first story soon.
At 10/29/04 09:26 PM, ladywarrior1 wrote: i would like to join if it isn't to late, i can't animate and i can't draw but i sure got a thing for writing. most of my stories are about romance, sadness or hatred i truly don't know why but they mostly are. since i can't make a flash on my own i sure would like to take advantage of this club so if it's okay with you i'll post my first story soon.
We would love it if you joined.
Please do post ur story.. i am interested i nreading it and commenting. I surely hope an animator is intrigued by your work and make sit into a flash.
the more the marrier.
Welcome mate.
Ok Iam joining to if no one's read my posts read them and tell me what u think of my Vampire Ninja idea, I might be able to show u the comics in a few days if I can get them converted and resized to fit.
I dropped out in the third grade, and spent all my time at the arcade.
At 10/29/04 10:41 PM, G-MAN490 wrote: Ok Iam joining to if no one's read my posts read them and tell me what u think of my Vampire Ninja idea, I might be able to show u the comics in a few days if I can get them converted and resized to fit.
Welcome compadre. Please show us the comics if you can. A vampire Ninjas a novel concept depending on how the script is written it could be very good.
BTW Im in the middle of writing the first chapter of a story for my English lessons. When Im done im going to post it for y'all to see.
At 10/30/04 02:14 PM, Frozen_Fox wrote:At 10/29/04 10:41 PM, G-MAN490 wrote: Ok Iam joining to if no one's read my posts read them and tell me what u think of my Vampire Ninja idea, I might be able to show u the comics in a few days if I can get them converted and resized to fit.Welcome compadre. Please show us the comics if you can. A vampire Ninjas a novel concept depending on how the script is written it could be very good.
ok sry looks like it'll take longer than I thought to get the comics up. photoshop wont install so I have to find and older version. sry this is taking so long! so uh gimme ur email if u want me to email them to u k?
I dropped out in the third grade, and spent all my time at the arcade.
At 10/30/04 03:46 PM, G-MAN490 wrote:
ok sry looks like it'll take longer than I thought to get the comics up. photoshop wont install so I have to find and older version. sry this is taking so long! so uh gimme ur email if u want me to email them to u k?
lol. dont worry about it :p. just post it when you can and you will get feedback. unless you want my feedback now then there isnt any real need for you to email them to me.
At 10/30/04 02:14 PM, Frozen_Fox wrote: BTW Im in the middle of writing the first chapter of a story for my English lessons. When Im done im going to post it for y'all to see.
I am counting on good content. Do not let me down. Did anyone ever read my insert a couple pages back :( I did not get any feedback. *sniff*
I'll live... I s'pose.
I had this weird idea for a book demons infest a cruise ship that crosses a certain point near the bermuda triandgle where the entrance to hell is and they find out about this and a lot of monks priests and his holyness himself go to face the demons with military assistance and he gets this huge holy sword from his big hat and lots of guns that he blesse so tey can hurt the demons its great i wouldnt mind making a movie about it but animation would be great to
As u can tell i love religous novels with ass kikings and big swords and mythalogical beings there great
At 10/29/04 08:50 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:
I personally write for two newspapers, one site (by Jan 1/05 it will be two) and a magazine. I am no joke. And I do not feel any of my current members are.
Write? Or have written?
I used to write for a newspaper (have since moved to a more predictable branch) and I find it hard to believe that you can be a regular writer for so much at the age of 18. I needed a degree in English lit. before they would even consider giving me an official position.
Failgrounds.
I am an animator, not the best in the world exactly, but I am a perfectionist and spend alot of time on the flashes I am serious about (that is probably why I have nothing good on Newgrounds right now), But I have a problem:
I can never stay focused on animating one movie.
I write scripts alot, and I have been told I am a funny guy, so if anyone here wants/needs an idea for a comedy movie, or just wants to put more jokes into there movies (prefferably comedy), just E-mail me:
boxerlock@gmail.com
I hope to be hearing from quite a few people, and I hope I get the oppurtunity to actually help someone.
Also, I would be glad to help people out on this thread if that is what they prefer, its their choice. I personally dont care, although I check my E-mail more often than I will check this thread.
Sorry boys, been away for a bit. Buried in work from school and work from work. Haven't had much time to continue my story, and the other day I did a complete edit of a story that someone posted on here, but the comp froze and I went berserk.
I should be more consistent when I don't have as much work and midterms are over. Til then, I cant promise anything. But I'll try. Cheers
At 10/31/04 10:10 AM, -TheDoctor- wrote:
:I find it hard to believe that you can be a regular writer for so much at the age of 18.
Ahh, yes, well... the newspaper is a local paper for an area of about 50 000 people. So it is not a big newspaper at all. I have written articles for both newspapers in my area. One of which i have only written for three times, their center is much larger reaching a region of 150 000 people.
For the site and magazine bit, it is for hockey. My father is a well-known man in canadian hockey and my name alone has gotten me a few writing jobs. I do not get paid extremely well, but i do it more for experience.
Currently, i am only writing for the one hockey magazine. I stopped writing for the local newspaper because i found myself too busy with my own writing endeavors. And the site, i only write for periodically (once a month or so). The second site is currently on hietas and they have yet to contact me since the delay of their site creation.
I guess you could say i am a little lucky and a little talented.
However, i do not want you to think these are million people city newspapers. These are small community newspapers. However, the magazine reach all the hockey players in ontario (which obviously is alot). They hockey site reaches hockey players across the world, but mostly canadians.
At 11/1/04 01:05 PM, Lysaer wrote: I should be more consistent when I don't have as much work and midterms are over. Til then, I cant promise anything. But I'll try. Cheers
Ahh, ya. I feel your pain. I am busy as hell too. I am two chapters behind on my novel :P
I hope to see some work soon tho. I am interested to read some.
Its good to hear from ya tho. :)
Good luck to ya mate. Dedication is key.
Yes, I did post this once before, i think on page 2.
However, i recieved no feedback. This time, i would like to hear some comments.
This is simply an insert from my novel. It is unedited and was the first thing i ever wrote towards this novel, so it is a little older and a bit sloppy.
The storyline is quite connected to this insert, but you would have to read the whole novel to understand. So do not look for a stoyline when you read it.
I would just like comments about intrigue, suspense, use of words and my general writing style.
It would mean alot to me. Thanks everyone.
Here it is:
Walking down those empty and endless streets I had lost all my sense of direction. It was pouring hard a cold crisp rain, every step I took sounded as if I had stepped into a whole new puddle. The buildings were tall and compact like any city. The commercial windows were hazed and the distance was foggy, although, the layer of fog on the downtown streets hung high. The wide street was a little hilly, but it was barely noticeable and very smooth in transition. At the bottom of the subtle hills on the main street I dropped a little under the fog layer and could see the lake waters just after the street end. The waters glistened for the moon shone brightly and reflected a crystal resemblance within some of the fog. My vision seemed misty and all I saw was faded to a dark shade of blue. Only the flickering streetlights, beaming yellow, did not hold this odd sensation of navy color. I pulled my hood over my head shielding the almost painful fast falling rain.
Wandering down the middle of the street, all I could hear was the loud thumping of my heart. My heart, which was pressed up in my throat, felt like a swollen beating that was too close to my ear. It had an emotion of unrest, for my heart, a sixth sense, gave me a feeling of piercing eyes in my direction. I calmly looked over my right shoulder, but nothing was there except the sky which was clouded with darkness.
The buildings of brick seemed twisted as the rain appeared to only fall around me. In likeness to an adult looking over a child the buildings stretched up and over me with an eerie bend. Everything seemed warped to shape my movement, no matter how far I walked I felt as If I had not moved. The almost never empty downtown was motionless and still I felt as if I was not alone.
Walking further, aimlessly, my fear grew stronger as my heart beat faster. Scared, I quickly spun to my left; yet again, nothing. As I looked around, everything I could see molded together with the travel of my eyes. My head was spinning; my senses were on full alert. All my fears flushed me with anxiety. Past visions I could not remember flashed with a scream before my weary eyes. I felt helpless, my life with no meaning or cause. One dry tear fell and shaped my left cheek. All my pains, all my tears, and all my doubts had struck me in the face making me not want to continue on that never ending path.
I fell onto my knees, my hands pressed against the cold and smoothly paved road. I cried. As my eyes followed the one solid yellow line underneath me into the distance I saw a comforting silhouette far away. It was someone I knew and could not reach, but dreadfully wanted to. It was someone I loved, someone to comfort me. This was a journey of a long hilly road I could not travel on my own. The future was too hard to make out if I continued solely.
The streetlights blew off with a quiet yet high toned hum, all went dark. The neon moon lay solemn in the precious tides of a starry night. My heart throbbed faster then before, it was now, again, the only thing my ears could make out. The blue sensations of color began to seep to a bloody red. Cars began to speed by me; the sidewalks were busy with young and old. I sensed havoc; my fear grew more then before. I heard screams. People were yelling in pain, children running out onto the streets. The shrieks and breaking glass muffled the sound of my fast beating heart.
Adrenaline of impatience sparked an emotion of regret. My tears dried and I lifted myself to my feet. The rain that flowed into the sewer beneath me was a dark crimson red. Death thickened the air. Lives were taken all around me. I could not make out who were the victims and who were the killers. The screams never seemed to stop for rest. The speeding cars drove by without an ounce of remorse only caring for their own very lives.
I took one step forward, but something stopped me. A large hand tensely held my right shoulder and would not release me. Without looking back I broke myself free, running for my life. I never once looked behind me. I could not stop running. My heart was again throbbing in my throat. My eyes swelled and my hearing faded. I woke up.
At 11/1/04 03:38 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:
Ahh, yes, well... the newspaper is a local paper for an area of about 50 000 people. So it is not a big newspaper at all. I have written articles for both newspapers in my area. One of which i have only written for three times, their center is much larger reaching a region of 150 000 people.
Ah, I see. Thanks for clarifying that.
Failgrounds.
At 11/2/04 01:03 PM, -TheDoctor- wrote: Ah, I see. Thanks for clarifying that.
No problem.
I really enjoy reading and writing for that Immortals RP.
Am i fitting in okay so far? I do not want to be throwing your guys storylines off too much.
Its intriguing and fun though.
At 11/2/04 03:44 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:
No problem.
I really enjoy reading and writing for that Immortals RP.
Am i fitting in okay so far?
Yeah, you are doing fine. Always glad to have new players.
Its intriguing and fun though.
Certainly is, the Newgrounds RP threads are always the best ;)
Failgrounds.
Good good.
SO where is everyone.
Any new stories to post and/or comment on.
P.S. We should be starting our collaborative script/short story sometime later this week. Post your ideas if your interested.
I think this guild is a good idea, I would love to be a part of it. I am a writer, right now I am working on several short stories. I will post links to them in time. so how do i put the "Writers Guild" attatchment to my messages?
