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Time

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Time 2004-09-06 14:41:36


So my lonely heart travels back in time
Holding up the moments we held each
Other close, getting lost in the moments
I got lost in your eyes and your kisses
Made me fly.

And all I can think is about holding you,
but time is a merciless companion and
even I wish that the time we spent
together would have turned into eternity
time goes by.

And so all I have to keep me warm in my
Lonely cold nights is the memory burned
Into my my mind, burned in my brain by
The heat of our love, burned by your sweet
Kisses.

My eyes closed I lay here imagine your
Sweet face in front of me, imagine your
Bumping heart close to mine, your soft
Fingertips running over my face playing
With my hair.

And all that keeps me up is seeing the time
Run by while I wait to see you again and so
This time I wish the time would shrink to
Seconds. But the time is a merciless companion
Running slow.

So time is what keeps us up, time is what keeps
Us apart, time is what makes the distance shrink
Time is what we spent together and what we curse
Waiting for each other. So isnt time like love,
hurt and joy all together?

Time

Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:49:03


if you actually wrote that...

its really good


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Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:51:56


Nice Uncle_Ozca- er, I mean "Time-is-merciless".

Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:53:18


not bad. are you a poet?

Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:54:59


huh

Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way.
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way.

Tired of lying in the sunshine staying home to watch the rain.
You are young and life is long and there is time to kill today.
And then one day you find ten years have got behind you.
No one told you when to run, you missed the starting gun.

So you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking
Racing around to come up behind you again.
The sun is the same in a relative way but you're older,
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death.

Every year is getting shorter never seem to find the time.
Plans that either come to naught or half a page of scribbled lines
Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way
The time is gone, the song is over,
Thought I'd something more to say.

Home, home again
I like to be here when I can
And when I come home cold and tired
It's good to warm my bones beside the fire
Far away across the field
The tolling of the iron bell
Calls the faithful to their knees
To hear the softly spoken magic spells.

Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:55:56


ummmm...... i get it now ur gay!

Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:57:34


sniff sniff, thats beautiful man.

Response to Time 2004-09-06 14:58:52


At 9/6/04 02:57 PM, Bigpapasakk wrote: sniff sniff, thats beautiful man.

Change your fucking sig, altr is the king of newgrounds drunks

Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:03:20


At 9/6/04 02:41 PM, Time_is_merciless wrote: So my lonely heart travels back in time

But why must you change your name to suit your exquisite poem? I mean, it's just not you.... It's more of a Tanner name.


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Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:04:01


OGM GOTH POEM

lawl@time.

Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:08:50


At 9/6/04 02:54 PM, EarFucker wrote: lyrics to pink floyd - money

i was going to post that

Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:09:44


EXCALIBUR

i froze your tears and made a dagger,
and stabbed it in my cock, forever.
it stays there like excalibur,
are you my arthur?
say you are.

take this cool dark steel-ed blade,
steal it
sheath it in your lake.
i'd drown with you to be together.
must you breathe?
cos i need heaven.

david brent


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Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:10:01


At 9/6/04 02:55 PM, crapmaster10 wrote: ummmm...... i get it now ur gay!

no, hes just a compassionate person. your an ass.

Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:10:11


At 9/6/04 03:03 PM, Hypocrite wrote: But why must you change your name to suit your exquisite poem? I mean, it's just not you.... It's more of a Tanner name.

I don't get it...

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Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:10:45


At 9/6/04 03:03 PM, Hypocrite wrote:
At 9/6/04 02:41 PM, Time_is_merciless wrote: So my lonely heart travels back in time
But why must you change your name to suit your exquisite poem? I mean, it's just not you.... It's more of a Tanner name.

its more like a stuporman name......gravity is merciless:P

Response to Time 2004-09-06 15:21:14


At 9/6/04 03:10 PM, EarFucker wrote: its more like a stuporman name......gravity is merciless:P

Yes :) Indeed....

Response to Time 2004-09-07 00:36:04


that was really cool...many people fail to really consider the effects of time..."hurt and joy altogether" indeed! in some instances time seems to fly, in others, an instant can feel like a lifetime. time always moves, but its impact stays the same.

ahh, makes me think of so many things...too bad it's so late and i'm already four beers deep. : \ soon it's buffalo wings and sleep. i'll probably have to revisit this topic tomorrow when i'm more clear-headed. :D


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Response to Time 2004-09-07 00:51:07


At 9/7/04 12:36 AM, gravity-is-merciless wrote: that was really cool...many people fail to really consider the effects of time..."hurt and joy altogether" indeed! in some instances time seems to fly, in others, an instant can feel like a lifetime. time always moves, but its impact stays the same.

Sometimes people thinks that time can be merciles...others, they think that is priceless...In fact, I belive is both...

Like when you go to see a comedy movie...if you laugh is because you are watching another person suffering on the screen...

This made me remind that when Mayra was with me, she always told me something like this : " There's more time than life, so why would we care about time? Let's enjoy life!"

She was older than me...and maybe that's why she was wiser and smarter... our time together was hurt and joy...

ahh, makes me think of so many things...too bad it's so late and i'm already four beers deep. : \ soon it's buffalo wings and sleep. i'll probably have to revisit this topic tomorrow when i'm more clear-headed. :D

hehehe.... ;)

Response to Time 2004-09-07 00:51:39


Thats deep man.


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Response to Time 2004-09-07 00:58:33


wow oscar. that was really a great poem. and for some resaon it nearly put a tear in my eye (i've only cried maybe once in the past two years. and that was at a friend's funeral)

you seem to have a very anguished heart (i understand why it is so) and the poem has the lue of a darker meaning. i dont know what inspired it. maybe its about your late girlfriend. or maybe it was more of a thinking of your present relationship. maybe something to do with your mother.

but for some reason that poem kinda hit.

very well done oscar.

and i hope your mood lightens.


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Response to Time 2004-09-07 01:05:27


Yeah time sucks... it makes us all old people someday and eventually kills us. I'd rather just be my age forever and ever, but it seems everyday time is creeping up on me. Next thing I know I'll be 30, then 40 and so on. Fuck.

Response to Time 2004-09-07 01:52:51


At 9/7/04 01:05 AM, GanonsTriforce wrote: Awesome.

Thanks...I did my best...after all, I'm foreign...and sometimes is hard to "feel" in another language...

Response to Time 2004-09-07 02:17:14


At 9/7/04 01:52 AM, Time_is_merciless wrote:
At 9/7/04 01:05 AM, GanonsTriforce wrote: Awesome.
Thanks...I did my best...after all, I'm foreign...and sometimes is hard to "feel" in another language...

hey, dont you start with her with your latin sexyness

btw, oscar meet allison. a very good friend of mine


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Response to Time 2004-09-07 02:18:19


That Weed is good, let me have some!!!!!!

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