At 4/8/23 03:57 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:At 4/8/23 05:46 AM, Nebulate wrote:At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.
hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!
the drawing is done. i hope you like it.
give some critisicim if its possible :)
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nebulate/alice-in-a-inferno
Also, thinking about lighting and adding some shading can give the character some depth and feel more 3d. Keep the lighting simple. I decided to put a light pointed down in front of her face to keep it simple. You can add complexity over time once you understand 3d shapes better. I added a gif of the changes. (Hopefully the gif works)
Hopefully, this critique helps.
Thanks again for drawing her, you did a good job and have been improving.
thanks for the critisisim. ill definently use these tips when i draw (less abstact) human characters.
and yeah i am definently shoud get out of my confort zone and actualy try shading
